aww i die but that ev that haulairious

Not a bad story it's a little unbelieveable but i like it cause it's easy to read.

Thanks, ya it is kinda unbelievable, with the guns and all, but it would be safer if they have guns. I have shot a 8 guage before. I think its funny how remy dies. teehee. And killer carrot u have the koolest deth anyways. sharky.

EDIT: changed it from marina 2 remy

not only is it a easy read, in my opinion its also a fun action packed (sometimes funny) read.

wow this is fun to read. its a great story so far. just dont end it too soon!

none to worry i wont. but i just got to figure out a way to get the characters to more areas...

SWEET I JUST GOT A SWEET CHANCE TO BE IN A FEATURE FILM! A ZOMBIE FEATURE FILM! its called Fido and they want me to be a zombie that gets close up to the camera and trys to kill sum1. Or a zombie in the background. either one, ITS STILL COOL! i might even get to bite somebody, eat em even perchance!

And now Part 4 1/2

Meanwhile….

Neo and the survivors who joined him went into the tropical fish exhibit. There was 2 open fish tanks, each on one side of the room. “What kinda fish are these?” Tom asked. Neo looked at the sign beside them from a distance. Flying Fish?“DON’T GO NEAR THERE!!” Neo yelled. “Why not?” Tom asked. “Its not like their gonna eat me alive. Their so tiny!”. Then, tons of flying fish started jumping onto Tom and eating his flesh. “AAAAAUUUUGGGGHHH!!!” Jarvis screamed in pain, as a few of them ripped into his throat. Tom fell to the ground. Dead. Then the fish started jumping across from tank to tank, tearing into the flesh of anybody in their way. Nobody even had a chance to fight back. Except Neo. 3 fish were heading straight for Neo’s neck, but he was too quick. He did a cool matrix dodge, into a backflip kick, and broke the fishes bones. He then pulled out his 8 gauge and shattered the fish tanks glass. The fish were flopping around on the ground, unable to breathe and he crushed a few of them with his shoe. Just then he and the others noticed some of their slaughtered comrades were getting up off the ground….

Well i just added 2 more things to some earlier scenes.

This one takes place as i run out of the gas station,

A zombie grabbed me suddenly and tried to bite me, but Devan punched it right in the temple, and it fell down. It then grabbed his leg, but he kicked its face in, caving in its skull.


And this is at the entrance of the aquarium.

We arrived in front of the building and there were 2 zombies. Adam pulled out his 2 pistols and shot them each in the face a few times. The zombies fell to the ground, dead.

mwahaha plot twist

Me, Burnside, and the others left the tunnel, disgusted from the horrid events. We suddenly heard gunshots and ran towards the sound to investigate. We entered the room Neo and the others were in, and there were zombies on the ground. “More of us got killed?” I asked. “Sadly, yes.” Neo answered. Just then we heard somebody yell “HEEELLLP!” from a nearby room. We entered the room and saw a man dressed in the same uniform that Neo and Burnside were wearing, Surrounded by strange froglike monsters. “Shakezulah!” Neo and Burnside both yelled at once. Everybody started shooting at the creatures, and the creatures were killed. “That was a close one!” Neo said. “Do you guys know this dude?” I asked. “He was part of our squad, but we thought he was killed when he got split up from us.” Burnside replied. “Wait a sec,” I said. “Shakezulah? Neo? Burnside? What kind of names are those?” I said. “Their our codenames.” Neo said. “Oooohh.” I said. “Doh’!”. “So, any idea what those things were?” I inquired. “I have no idea, but it looks like they were frogs mutated from the virus spill.” Burnside said. We then looked around, and noticed that we were in the frog exhibit. “We better get out of here then.” I said “There could be more of those things around here. Tons of them even!”. More of them suddenly came around a nearby corner. Jimmy held up his pistols and shot the 3 creatures down. One of them he blew off most of its head.

We escaped from that room with our newfound comrade Shakezulah and found ourselves in a jungle surrounding. “The hell?” Jimmy asked. “Were in the rainforest exhibit!” I said. Then I remembered something from the exhibit, as I have seen the aquarium a few years before. “I looked up, and suddenly, a huge mutated sloth creature, with gigantic claws jumped out of the treetops. I quickly jumped out of the way of its claw, but sadly, Jimmy wasn’t quite fast enough. Its claw tore through his chest cavity like butter and ripped out his lungs. Everybody was screaming as the creature came closer, and it knocked me to the ground. It was about to tear me in half, and then its head go shot clean off by a few high caliber pistol shots.

I looked over and saw Adam, soaking wet, covered in blood, holding a high caliber pistol, looking like he was in excruciating pain. I then noticed why. Adam’s hand was missing. “Holy crap we gotta give him a bandage and some painkillers!” I yelled. “Uhhgh.” He said. “Damn shark, thinks he’s so great. Well he’s, *ugh* not.” Adam was crying, but who wouldn’t be. The pain must have been terrible. “Here, take some of these. They will repel the virus from your shark bite.” Shakezulah said to him. He also handed Adam some painkillers. Jarvis and Derek, two other survivors from my group, helped Adam stand up. We escaped the room and got out of the aquarium, though maybe it was safer in there after all…

I found some info on the zombie movie i was talkin bout

"Fido" is set in Willard, a small town lost in the idyllic world of the 50's, where the sun shines every day, everybody knows their neighbour, and rotting zombies carry the mail.

Years ago, the earth passed through a cloud of space dust, causing the dead to rise with an insatiable hunger for human flesh. Terror spread across the land, until a collar was invented that made the zombies docile, even useful. A company was born: ZomCon. Thanks to their patented domestication collar™, zombies became gardeners, milkmen, butlers, and even pets. ZomCon would like everyone to believe that they have the world under control - but do they?

Timmy Robinson doesn't think so. He thinks the world is "phony-baloney". An awkward loner, Timmy spends so much time in his room, even his own parents don't notice him. So when Mom buys a zombie to help around the house, Timmy is surprised, and even curious, when the beast wants to play catch. As the pair plays baseball in the park, the zombie saves Timmy from the local bullies. A true friendship is born and Timmy names the zombie, "Fido".

But Fido's collar goes on the fritz, and Timmy's cranky old neighbor Mrs. Henderson pays the ultimate price. That night, Timmy sneaks back to the park to bury her, but discovers it's too late - she's already turned into a flesh-crazed zombie! In a fight to the finish, he chops off her head with a shovel and buries her in a flowerbed.

To complicate matters, ZomCon's notorious zombie-control specialist, Mr. Bottoms, has moved in across the street - soon becoming Timmy and Fido's worst nightmare. Lucky for Timmy, Bottoms' daughter Cindy has a crush on him, and becomes a valuable ally.

Timmy causes mayhem as he fights to keep Fido a member of the family. Mom and Dad are divided on what to think of Timmy's new best friend, and it isn't long before Dad puts his foot down. So when it's discovered what really happened to Mrs. Henderson, Timmy is forced to take Fido to the only place that he'd be safe, past where the cornfields end, across the river to the mythical "Wild Zone".

But Fido is captured and enslaved at ZomCon. In a final, risk-all adventure, Timmy, Mom, and even Dad, rescue Fido from the dark forces of ZomCon. Fido returns to his place in the Robinson family, and the Robinsons, oddly enough, learn from a dead man what it really means to be alive.

that movie actually doesnt sound too bad.

hehe and thanks for adding me to the story

ur welcome

New part


We were walking around Stanley Park, being cautious of any zombies, or other hideous creatures of Bio-Can. We encountered 4 zombies, and Jarvis took out a magnum. He shot the first zombie in the eye, and shot apart the other 2 zombies faces. He completely and utterly destroyed the final zombies head. We started running away, and suddenly we heard something.

“CAW! CAW CAW CAW CAW!” some crows were cawing out loud. We then thought that they wouldn’t be any threat whatsoever, so started to walk away. Suddenly we heard the flapping of wings and turned around. oh cr-. But my thought was interrupted by the screaming of pain. I quickly looked and saw the crows ripping into Jarvis’s flesh and pecking so deep we could see bone. Muscle tissue was being flung about as if it was confetti. We all started running, not wanting to take chances and waste ammo on a flock of crows. We then saw a building that said “Bio-Canada” on it. “Better in there than out here!” I yelled. Hopefully…

We entered the building. “Uhhh wouldn’t Bio-Can want to be out of the publics eye?” I asked. “Well, Bio-Can is disguised as a natural vitamin making company. That’s why its in the park, so it seems that they are using the plants from the park to create their vitamins.” Shakezulah told me. “At least while we are here we will be able to stop Bio-Can in their tracks!” I said. The three ZBI operatives looked at each other with a grim look on their face. “What is it?” I asked. “Well..” Burnside said. “I’m afraid to say that there are Bio-Can facilities all over Canada. We have taken down three others, but we have yet to find the coordinates of the other facilities…” He informed me.

We then broke into three groups, Burnside leading one, Neo leading the other, And Shakezulah leading the third. I joined up with Shakezulah’s group. We looked into a room with a biohazard sign on it. It didn’t really matter, as all the rooms did. Even the bathroom! When we entered, we were stopped by 3 zombies. Only this time, the zombies were armed.

I edited jarvises death. i made it so tom gets eaten by flying fish

awsome! i still like it so far. so many people are dying tho. not that its bad, cuz its gory.

It's reading well. Definately a fun story.

and all the people in dis story are my friends. and u ppl. well not al the ppl but they are all ppl i know. plus u three.

o ya and be lookin fer a sequel to the story set 10 years in the future, featureing everybodies favorite zombie killers. Me, BS, Shakezulah, and Neo. and maybay some otheres

Burnside and his group slowly walked down the hallway, everybody shaking in fear, except Burnside, confident that this lab would be destroyed. He discovered a room and they entered, scanning the room for zombies. After they discovered that there were no zombies in the room. They let down their weapons. Derek saw a tube that had a huge horrible creature, with a gigantic claw. He saw a red button, and curiously pressed it. Then, suddenly, the liquid in the tube started to drain. This doesn’t look good… Derek thought to himself. “Er, Burnside?” Derek asked. “Ya?” Burnside said. “Is that bad?” and Derek pointed to the slowly draining tube. “Umm… Ya I think so.” “Shall we run?” Derek asked. “Lets.” Burnside replied.

They started running and yelling. The other two squads heard and we all started to escape, the armed zombies still following. Neo and Shakezulah took care of them and everybody got out of the building, we were once again were in the park. We encountered zombies along the way, and Derek took 3 of them out with some nice head shots. As we were running we noticed the trees were moving. In a strange way. The trees suddenly reached out their branches, and grabbed Jackson, another survivor from my group, and started tearing him to shreds before our eyes. We looked in horror at the events taking place. We escaped the park, and noticed something in the street. “The bus!” everybody yelled joyfully. We approached the bus and discovered why it was stopped in the bus. The door was broken open and their were strange creatures ripping apart the bus driver. Hunters.. I thought. Everybody raised their weapons and started firing at the creatures, and the creatures turned around angrily. Most of them attacked, some continuing their meal. They tore through some of the survivors like butter. Blood flew everywhere. Quickly as it was started, the battle finished. There were a few casualties, sadly, but it’s a small price to pay for many more peoples lives.

We jumped into the bus, the keys still in the ignition. Burnside kicked the corpse out of the bus and we started to drive. “Lets go to the airport.” Shakezulah said. “I have a pilots license.”. Suddenly we heard a *thunk* on top of the bus. Derek started to say “What the crap was tha-” but his sentence was interrupted when a huge claw stuck through the roof and jabbed into his body. Derek screamed in pain, then his body went limp. Dead.

lol funny so many deaths lol gore gore gore blood iwant more guns tho and exploding heads but its not my stoyry so....
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guns death violennce killing!!!!!
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im getting a USMC K-bar fighing knife whoopie

sweet. i have a pilot's license!

ima gonna make a sequel after

Everybody grabbed their weapons and started firing at the creature, though it seemed it wasn’t doing any harm. The creature swung its mighty claw towards us again, and slaughtered two of the other survivors from my group. The creature let out a roar, and as it was doing so Burnside took out a grenade and threw it towards the creatures face, and somehow, it went right into the creatures mouth. “EVERYBODY GET OUT OF THE BUS!!” Neo yelled. We all ran out of the bus and then there was an explosion sending guts and blood everywhere, and pieces of the bus. A piece of wreckage went flying into Michael J, another survivor from my group, and blew him in half grubbily.

We started running away from the scene towards the direction of the airport. “I’m pretty sure this is the way to the airport.” Burnside said. We encountered a few zombies in the street, and We took them out with a few headshots. Just then we heard a howl. “What was that?” I asked. Just then, some horribly decayed dogs ran out from an alley. Everybody started firing at the creatures, and one of them knocked me down. “AAAAHHH!” I screamed. Then somebody’s foot came and smacked into the dogs ribcage, breaking its ribs. “Thanks Rylan.” I said. Rylan was another survivor from my group. “LOOK OUT!” I yelled and started firing my pistol, as one of the dogs jumped or Rylan. Before I could kill it, it tore into Rylan’s neck, killing him. I then killed the creature with a final gunshot and reloaded. Another creature started running towards me, and I fired towards it and missed. Then suddenly bullets flew through its side, and I saw Neo standing a few feet away holding a smoking pistol. “That was the last of them.” He said.

We started to continue our trek to the airport. A Resident Evil Apocalypse movie poster hung on the side of a movie store window. Then I heard gunshots coming from nowhere. I looked up and saw something standing on top of a building, holding 2 guns. Devan? I thought to myself. Only it wasn’t Devan anymore, just a horrible mutant wearing his face. Keinan, another survivor whom most of us hated, aimed his pistol at the mutant. He fired a shot, but he didn’t have a good grip on his pistol and it flew out of his hand. The creature started firing at Keinan, and blew him apart. It then blew off Adams other hand. “WHAT ARE THE ODDS!” Adam yelled while in great pain. The creature let out a mighty roar as we shot at it, and it lost its balance and fell off the building. Since he was such a new mutant, his skin and bones were still soft. It fell on top of Adam, and Adam broke right through the soft fragile bones and skin. Adam was coated in blood, an intestine hung on his shoulder. We gave Adam more painkillers and continued our walk.

lol i have no hands and i have poop on my sholder gerat lol jk its awsome

ist not poop its intestines. they are different. if i wanted poop on u i woulda had laxitive monsters in this story

LOL lax LOL devan LOL Lax LOL but theres probably poop in the intesnine

Adam, ifin u wanna talk on my freakin forum, NO LARGE ORANGE TEXT! and the laxative incident with devan is off topic. Tho funny. not tryin to be mean, ur just kinda annoying me. Ur story is pro though.

Awesome!! I love this story.

Oh and Killer Carrot, drop the silly poop jokes, they're not needed. You may want to tone down the size of your text a little too. It looks untidy and, well, 'like poop'.

finally somebody who agrees! Im surprised that there was this little of rantage bout his text.

It's not rantage, it's moderator request.
The difference? I can actually do something about it.

MUHAHAHAHA! Good to be moderator eh?

i have edited a part. rather then sean shootin marina, he shoots Remy! (another kid he hates)

My bros said i shudent make a sequel too a short story.... so im gonna make a prequel about what happened to Neo, Burnside, and Shakezulahs squad

maybe you could make a prequel AND a sequel? just a thought. i dont see why a sequel would be a bad idea.

Almost but not quite the end

Just then a gigantic, large toothed, huge clawed, red and black monster smashed out from under the concrete. It had spikes on its back and long, powerful arms and legs. It also had two horns on its head and another horn on its nose. It also had long large wings. It let out a mighty roar and started running towards us. “RUN AWAY!!!” I yelled, and started running and firing towards the creature. “I’ll take care of this…” Burnside said. He reached towards his grenade holster, but no grenades were left! “Oh crap!” Burnside yelled. Shakezulah reached into his backpack, and pulled out a beer. “This isn’t the time!” Neo yelled. But then Neo realized just what exactly Shakezulah was doing, the reason being Shak was taking out a cloth as well. He put the cloth in the beer, and lit it on fire. “TAKE THIS!!” he yelled. He threw the Moltov Cocktail at the creature, and it landed beside the monster, and exploded. The creatures leg got blown right off, and it caught on fire. Its skin started to bubble and burn. It soon got way too disgusting to watch, and we started running towards the airport.

We entered the airport, gladly not encountering any more of those creatures. We looked outside and saw a medium sized jet, more than large enough to carry us all. We ran outside towards the runway, and saw that our luck had just run out. There where tons and tons of zombies out there, seemingly knowing that we were going to be there. They started walking towards us, a short distance away from the jet. “RUN TO THE PLANE! ITS OUR ONLY HOPE!!” Neo yelled. We started running towards the plane, just narrowly beating the zombies to it. We entered the plane, and Shakezulah quickly hotwired it. We cheered as we heard the engines start. We started to move up the runway, running over zombies. Then to my horror, I saw a zombie get sucked into one of the engines on the wing. It got lodged in and I screamed in terror, and the plane exploded.

AND NOW THE CONCLUSION!

I opened my eyes, and noticed the pain. “Uugh..” I groaned in pain. It was raining heavily. I slowly and painfully pulled myself up off of the ground. I saw the sun rising over the horizon. It was still a bit dark though, as the sun was just coming up. I looked around and saw the dead, burned bodies of my companions, and all the zombies. I’m alive! I’m the only one left… Then, in the distance, I saw people coming over a nearby hill. Oh no! Gotta get out of here! Just then, I saw zombies coming from all the other directions as well. I wont let them kill me…I then looked into my pistol. Only one bullet left… The zombies were slowly coming closer and closer. In a minute they would be all over me, and tear me limb from limb. “I wont let them kill me….” I quietly said to myself. “I wont become one of them!” I quietly mumbled. I looked back at my pistol. Only one bullet… I looked back at the legion of the undead, closing in. At least I wont become one of them… It’ll be quick and painless, yes, quick and painless… I held the gun up to my head, and closed my eyes.

my fingers are numb from all the typing...

what a depressing ending. why did you have to make everyone die? you didnt even leave it open for a possible sequel.

Yes, yes i did. u will see Shakezulah, ULL ALL SEE!!! MUHAHAHAHA!!! My other ending was it being a dream, but my bro said that its illegal and if i did, my readers would stab me wit forks. And if they didnt he would. plus i got a whole bunch of better endins anfter that. the other one was everybody survives. But MY ending is much more mysterious.... yes.... mysterious...

In my opinion, adams luck was as bad as whats his face from CV. Teh guy who rescued claire. He went thru alot o pain!

if u want more info on me next stories, check me blog.

Here is a cover i made for my story, while i was bored one night.

haha that's pretty good.

Yo be sure to check my ongoing zombie fiction out too, the link can be found in my signature.

hey thats the zombie from Zombie! i have that movie. well actually i have Zombie 2, but its exactly the same thing for some reason. that movie was weird, kinda boring, but cool at the end. anyways, that cover is reall neat. good job!

ya it is the zombie from zombie. i like that message at the bottom of the case. "Zombie. Were Coming To Eat You!"

look at my sig to get the link for the topic of my sequel. make title suggestions plz.

"The mystery of the Vancouver project".

Hmm...