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~Nemesis~
hi and now for yet another zombie fan fiction. walken and fox i didnt know about ur story when i started mine so im not copying. just wanted u to know that. Can somebody plz help me with a title cuz im no good at titles. its about zombies and a school trip to vancouver. right now all i got is "resident evil outbreak: file V (for vancouver!)" or "The Vancouver Outbreak". any ideas?
TaintedDoughnuts
The vancouver project
Welcome to vancouver
~Nemesis~
QUOTE(TaintedDoughnuts @ May 11 2005, 07:43 PM)
The vancouver project
Welcome to vancouver
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thats pretty cool thumbsup.gif great idea. Its on the top of my list so far just waitin for yet another post or 2 to broadin my choices.
~Nemesis~
aaaaahhhh i dont wanna right no mores....... heres an excerpt (thats the right word, right?) enjoi.


The Vancouver Outbreak
By Zack Mader


“I cant wait to see the aquarium when we get to Vancouver!” I said. I was going on 2-day trip with the other grade 7’s to Vancouver to go and see the Vancouver aquarium, as we were studying sea life. Suddenly I heard the busdriver yelling “NO YOU CANT BRING A BIKE ON THE BUS! It has to be put into the lower compartment.”. “Ok…” said Sean. “Man Sean, you like bikes too much.” I said. “Ya never know…” he said “I might get a chance for some biking.”.

We then started off for Vancouver, everybody looking forward to the trip. Nobody had a clue on what would happen when we got there…
BurnSide
Ahhh zombie fictions. Gotta love them.
~Nemesis~
QUOTE(BurnSide @ May 11 2005, 08:12 PM)
Ahhh zombie fictions. Gotta love them.
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what would the world do without em?
~Nemesis~
got some storyline.... BS u and Neo will be members from a squad sent in to investigate the stuff at vancouver and u and him are the last survivors of it. U even get to fight off evil fishes at the van aquarium. yay fishies.
Killer Carott
lol sounds like its going to be an awsome story when ur done tongue.gif thumbsup.gif
~Nemesis~
QUOTE(Killer Carott @ May 12 2005, 02:12 PM)
lol sounds like its going to be an awsome story when ur done  tongue.gif thumbsup.gif
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Maybay............
ForRizzle
Zombies are real!


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Killer Carott
lol funny pic laugh.gif
BurnSide
Is that a catscan of Michael Jackson? laugh.gif
ForRizzle
Ouch.. Its getting cold in here blink.gif
~Nemesis~
eh BS can zombies kneel down? cuz i have a part where one is.... in part 2. excerpt time.


A few hours later we arrived in Vancouver. The strange thing though was the fact that there was nobody to be seen! “Wow where is everybody?” my friend Devan asked. “There must be some big event somewhere and everybody is there.” I said. “Must be.” Adam answered.

“Uh-oh.” said the bus driver “Almost outta gas. Gotta make a pit stop we does”.
We stopped at a nearby gas station and everybody got out to stretch. “I’m gonna go inside and buy some chips.” said Tyler. “Me too” I said. We walked inside the gas station and grabbed some chips. We went to the till and the guy at the register and he was kneeled down doing something. We rung the little bell thing and he slowly stood up. He turned around and he had blood all over him and around his mouth! “HOLY SH*T!” Tyler blurted out loudly. The cannibalistic minimum wage worker grabbed his neck and bit his shoulder, and ripped out strands of muscle tissue. “AAHHHH!” I screamed. Tyler was dead.
BurnSide
Answered in PM, but yes of course they can.
Killer Carott
wow thats awsome me loves gorey
~Nemesis~
dont we all
ForRizzle
Gorey it then.. This Zombie is for you!

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~Nemesis~
so what doya guys think? good? bad? i need opinions!
BurnSide
Well you should realy write alot more and just post the whole thing rather than giving us tiny tidbits. It's fun though. original.gif
ForRizzle
What do we think about what?
~Nemesis~
QUOTE(BurnSide @ May 12 2005, 03:03 PM)
Well you should realy write alot more and just post the whole thing rather than giving us tiny tidbits. It's fun though. original.gif
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will do.
~Nemesis~
QUOTE(ForRizzle @ May 12 2005, 03:03 PM)
What do we think about what?
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me story
Killer Carott
QUOTE(ForRizzle @ May 12 2005, 03:57 PM)
Gorey it then.. This Zombie is for you!

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awsome
well heres some pic that i drew that r gorey
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P.S. the pink is supose to be red like blood but my stupid scanner went cooky
ForRizzle
Dude your like the guy who blasted the school on that indian reservation..
Killer Carott
QUOTE(ForRizzle @ May 12 2005, 04:09 PM)
Dude your like the guy who blasted the school on that indian reservation..
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what was that, i dont get it i didnt here bout that
and i dont actually kill ppl or plan to but i like drawing fruits and veggies that do lol
ForRizzle
The guy Jeff Weise who went on the killing spree at his school earlier in the year posted a graphic animated video he made on the net right before he went on the massacre. Reminded me of that. Here is a link to the video and a write up on Weise. Check it out

http://www.thesmokinggun.com/archive/0323051weise1.html
BurnSide
Thanks guys, but killer fruits and school shooting are a little too far off from the topic. Let's get back to on topic please.
~Nemesis~
ya really. Hey BS i got to the part with you and Neo grin2.gif. u get a hi calibur pistol and blew the heads off some zombies.
Killer Carott
awsome post so more when u can it sounds awsoem and if u post the whole story that will take a awile befroe its done so post little parts then the whole story when its done
~Nemesis~
ok here is some more.

I started to run as fast as I could, the zombie heading at me now. Oh god poor Tyler. It’s a dream it’s a dream it’s a… I then ran out of the gas station and I saw something horrible. “MORE ZOMBIES?!?” I yelled. There were four zombies by the gas pumps. People were running and screaming. Blood was splattered on the hard concrete. I suddenly saw that one of the zombies was much less decayed. It then turned around and I saw why. No! First Tyler, now Tanner! That’s it…

I quickly looked around for a weapon. All I could see was a big tree branch sitting in a ditch a few meters away from the gas station. It’ll have to do… I then got an idea. I opened up the lower compartment of the bus and took out Sean’s bike. I jumped on and rode past them and each time I passed I hit their heads with the branch. This isn’t working! I then hit a rock and fell off the bike into the ditch. Then a zombie was coming towards me. It was coming closer and closer. Then all of a sudden I heard a gun shot and the zombies head was half gone, brain matter and chips of bone flying away. Then there were multiple gun shots and the zombies were dead. “High caliber pistols.” I heard a voice say. “Gotta love em.”. I looked over towards where the voice was coming from the direction that the voice came from. There was a man in a trench coat holding a smoking pistol. “Aaaah don’t shoot us!” Devan yelled. “If he was going to kill us he wouldn’t have just saved us Devan! So who are you guys?” I asked. “Burnside, team leader of the ZBI’s elite squad. And this is Neo.”. “ZBI? What’s that?” Adam asked. “The Zombie Beurou of Investigation. The other members of our squad were viscously ripped apart from an onslaught of zombies. We are the last survivors from our squad. We were sent in to investigate some strange reports from people that saw strange things near the building of a research company named Bio-Canada. A Canadian research company that we recently discovered was founded by employee of Umbrella, a company that created Bio-Organic weapons and caused world chaos and killed hundreds of thousands of people. We now know that Bio-Canada was trying to recreate Umbrella and also create Bio-Weapons that can resist cold climates.” Neo explained. “Umbrella? Bu-bu-but that’s not real! Its from a game!” Adam said. “It’s a real company that was in Japan. It was stopped 10 years ago though. People were told to believe that it was Iraq that destroyed the cities. People didn’t even know about the outbreaks. Somehow Capcom found out, and passed off the idea as their own.” Burnside informed us. “We should get out of here guys. There could be more zombies nearby.” said Neo.

Killer Carott
awsoem keep the gore comin'
~Nemesis~
ah crap the ittalic writing isnt ittalic anymore
BurnSide
Niice.

To do italics, the text needs to be in italics html. Basically, this code at the beginning and end of the text, without the spaces:

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~Nemesis~
There fixed it
BurnSide
Glad i could help. thumbsup.gif
Shakezulah
thats a cool story so far. i like it. keep the gore comin!
~Nemesis~
i might be like steve burnside and become a monster, then remember who i am and stuff and be nicey nice nice. not die tho. and get an antidote and stuff.
~Nemesis~
nvm scratch that
~Nemesis~
Part Three: Theres a little mcdonalds in everyone....

Me, Burnside, Neo, and the others got onto the bus. As we started to drive away, Burnside through a grenade out the window into the gas station. As he threw it, I saw the dead teachers and kids getting up. And the zombies that didn’t have their heads shot off were also getting up again. “Wow” I said. “Just like Crimson Heads, only these are real. I hope they BURN IN HELL!”. Then the grenade exploded, destroying the gas station and the zombies.

“Turn left up here.” Neo said. “There’s a government weapons vault disguised as a McDonalds.”. “Ok.” replied the bus driver. As we were driving we saw 7 zombies in the street. The bus driver ran most of them down, and Neo and Burnside took care of the rest. We pulled into the McDonalds. There were bloody hand prints on the windows, and a severed leg sitting in the parking lot. “This has to be the worst thing to ever happen in this country.” Devan said. “God I hope none of those things are in there.” Kieran said. “Don’t we all..” Sean said.

We entered the McDonalds with Neo and Burnside going in first to check it out. Me and Devan followed in last and we looked around. We then went into the weapons room and everybody got armed with weapons. Devan went around a corner and I heard a scream. Burnside and I ran around the corner, and to our horror, we saw that a zombie had ripped out Devans stomach and his intestines were hanging out. “HOLY CRAP!” Kieran yelled. “EAT LEAD LEAD EATER!!” A few pistol shots and that zombie didn’t have any teeth to eat entrails. Or most of its head for that matter. Kieran then shot Devan in the head, so he wouldn’t become zombified.





Edit: It's good Nemesis, but i can't allow offensive language on the board. Please be mindful of swear words. I've removed them.
BurnSide


Edit: sry i make a non swearing version for the site and do what i will with my own version.
Killer Carott
lol sweet tongue.gif me loveing killing gunsmilie.gif
BurnSide
I didn't remove any of the story Carrot, simply changed offensive words to less offensive words.
Killer Carott
QUOTE(BurnSide @ May 12 2005, 09:07 PM)
I didn't remove any of the story Carrot, simply changed offensive words to less offensive words.
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k i didn't really notice that till nemisis PMed me wink2.gif
~Nemesis~
changed the title from "The Vancouver Outbreak" to "The Vancouver Project, Welcome to vancouver."
Shakezulah
awsome story so far dude! i love this stuff.
Neo2005
Gvt weapons vault disguised as a McDonalds!
I like that.
~Nemesis~
QUOTE(Neo2005 @ May 13 2005, 10:31 AM)
Gvt weapons vault disguised as a McDonalds!
I like that.
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It just came to me for so reason whatsoever. thanks guys ima gonna try to get 2 or so parts done today grin2.gif.
~Nemesis~
More mcdonalds stuff!

Just then we heard another scream. Me, Sean, and Neo ran around the corner and so a zombie grabbing for Remy, another survivor. “AAAAAHHH!!” screamed Sean, and he shot his 8 gauge towards the two. He missed. Remy's head then exploded, blood flying all over the room, nothing left of his head except shards of bone on the ground. Neo then filled the zombies skull full of bullets. After he felled the zombie, he snatched the gun from Sean’s hands. “People around you aren’t safe if you have access to that thing!!” Neo yelled. He then gave Sean a pistol with a laser pointer. “Maybe now you wont miss!” he said. “Actually, I didn’t miss…” Sean quietly mumbled under his breath.

As we exited the McDonalds, to our horror, we saw more zombies. And the bus was gone! That damn bus driver! He was supposed to guard the bus, not take it away! “Quickly you guys!” Burnside shouted. “Follow me!”.

The joke there is that in real life Sean really does hate Remy! teehee...

Edit: Changed marina too remy. She read the story.... tongue.gif
Killer Carott
lol thats funny exploding heads YAY!!!!!
~Nemesis~
ooh more more more

part 4: Buried at Sea...

Everybody followed Burnside and Neo into Stanley Park. We saw a group of 3 zombies eating a corpse. Adam shot a couple of times into the back of ones head and it crumpled to the ground. The other 2 turned around and started to come towards us. Neo shot both of their heads clean off with the 8 gauge that he took from Sean. “Now that’s how to use a shotgun properly kid.” Neo said. “Don’t call me kid!” Sean said. “Come on you guys this isn’t the time!” I said. “Hey look there’s a building we could take cover in for a while!” Derek exclaimed.

We went towards the building and found what we came to Vancouver for. “It’s the Aquarium!” Jarvis said. “Obviously…” I replied. We entered the building, being wary of zombies. Adam looked down into a tank. “There’s nothing in there anymore!” he said. Just then a huge shark lunged up and pulled Adam into the tank. “NOOOOO!!” We all yelled. I questioned Burnside. “That shark, was it…” “Mutated? Surprisingly yes. I’m guessing an infected person fell in the tank after being bitten by a zombie.” he answered, “Either that, or the virus is in the air, and anybody could be infected at any time.”. Everybody looked at him with a frightened look. “Luckily, we enough antidote for you anybody who gets bitten. Just a few drops from it and you will be fine if you get infected.” he said. “Then we don’t have to worry about that.” I said. “We might as well check this place out. We might find something about Bio-Can.” Neo said.

We split into 2 groups, Burnside leading one, and Neo leading the other. I joined up with Burnside and we went into the Coastal Reefs exhibit. At the start of the exhibit we saw a few zombies. Ryan pulled out his 2 magnums and shot them each in the forehead, he then walked towards one of the felled zombies and crushed its head with his foot. He then kicked the others heads off, so they wouldn’t come back again. We got half-way through the exhibit and then saw something horrible. It was a huge mutated jellyfish sitting right in the middle of the path, blocking it. We pulled up our guns and then one of its stingers wrapped around Ryan. “NOT ANOTHER OF MY FRIENDS!” I yelled. It then filled Ryan full of an electric charge and he exploded. “TAKE THIS YOU PULSATING BALL OF PUS!” I yelled. I blew it apart with my M4 Carbine. “I showed that thing what happens when u kill my friends.” I said.
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