Hi everyone im making a sequel to my first story. its placed 10 years into the future (not including part one) and is about the ZBI and Bio-Can creating another building in kelowna. i need a title. any suggestions?

hmm thats a tough one and its hard for others to give a title if its not there story and i could maybe give u a title if i knew more aboyu the story

I don;t know a title but i do really like the Bio-Can thing.
It has a real catchy zing to it.

Finally, a title idea came to me! Im not sure if its good so I want your opinion. How does "Bio-Can Uprising" sound?? And I'm trying to think of a title to the series itself... Your ideas will be appreciated everybody!

well ya that could be a good title in my opinion but if it was my story id just try to get something origial im just saying but thast dont sound lf bad

I have absolutely no idea what you just said. Except the part about it not being original, but I dont get how it isn't original. Other than the fact the story is a RE fan fiction.

Prologue time!

RE Canada Saga #2
Infection Kelowna


Hello, my name is Zack Mader, but my codename is Nemesis. Me and the other squad members were recently told about another Bio-Can lab sprouting in the town of Kelowna, B.C. 3 others had been reported in the past month, so we were starting to get worried about just what may happen. After the horrible outbreak in Vancouver 10 years ago, I wasn’t sure about what was going to happen to our great country. I was one of the survivors of that accident, and ever since, I have sworn to stop Bio-Can at all costs. I almost died during that accident, but I was saved by some members of a different squad of the force I now work for. I was only 13 then, and I thought I was going to die.

Our escape plane, it exploded during liftoff. I thought I was the sole survivor. I was surrounded by hundreds of zombies. I almost killed myself to insure not becoming one of them, but then, there was tons of gunfire, and I hid behind the fuselage of the plane wreckage. There were soldiers. How did they know? I pondered.

After they were finished, I talked to one of the soldiers. They told me somebody by the name of Burnside had called hours earlier, and they rushed to the scene. He was just recently radioing them that they were at the Vancouver International Airport, when they heard an explosion and then, nothing came but static.

The soldiers were checking the fuselage for survivors. I hope that there are others I thought to myself. Just then, some soldiers came out, carrying bodies.

“Are they alive?”
“Hardly! Get them into the choppers, stat!”

I looked over, and saw the survivors faces. I saw the unconscious, burned, bloody faces of some of my comrades. I saw Kieran, Adam, Burnside, Sean, Shake, and Neo. There were also some others, but I could not see their faces.

Thank god I’m not the only one I thought. I got into a chopper, and fell asleep.

See Neo? I told you that you wouldn't die!

Cool beginning, Nemesis.

Not bad.
But usually the prolouge doesn;t contain the main character it contains someone else.

Meh I was just trying to explain everything in one part.

I will update parts almost everyday, so be on the look out.

You gotta love that word, Ponder

Looking good.
The best part is your determination to stick with the story.

New part, from a different view of things

Part 1: Enter Kelowna

My codename: Neo. My actual name is confidential for safety purposes. This afternoon me and the squad I am a member of set off for Kelowna today, to stop the evil that is Bio-Can. I have worked on the force for 15 years now, luckily. 10 years ago, my job on the force nearly ended when I was called in to Vancouver after a strange virus plagued the town and I was sent with some other members of the force to investigate. While we were there, most of our squad was taken out by these strange creatures that remotely resembled a gigantic, mutant fly. They came in out of no where, and started tearing apart the other squad members, but that’s a story for another day. Me and whom I thought was the only other survivor, Burnside, the Team Leader, had stumbled across a large group of survivors that were here on a school trip. Together we fought our way through Vancouver and arrived in the airport, after finding another member of our squad. We got into a plane, and a zombie got stuck in the engine. Our plane exploded, and I passed out from pain. When I woke up, their were zombies everywhere, so I ducked into the fuselage. I suddenly heard gun shots and helicopter propellers, and a zombie crawled in, but I kicked it in the head, caving in its skull. Then, some soldiers looked into the fuselage and I passed out. I woke up in the hospital, and was treated for the virus and my wounds. There were some other survivors, but I wasn’t sure who.

Now, it may just happen again, in this town Kelowna. But I’m determined to stop Bio-Can this time. I’m not going to let them take away more innocent lives.

Thanks BS. I acctually forgot about the story, and suddenly remembered and decided I should stick with what i said and started working on it.

For all you who have come looking for a new part, its because I was busy since Friday and was at my dads house, so I couldn't continue. I will add another part tonight.

Sorry everyone the story is stuck. In other words I have the worlds biggest case of writers block. I have been attempting to start, but every time i get writers block and cant think of ANYTHING. And I am not starting over. I refuse.

Oh come one, why not!?!?

You have great determination! The All Mighty BurnSide even knows so! The beginning to your Zombie story is good! I neeeed to read more zombie stories, we all do! Otherwise I just have to resort to shooting them in video games rather than imagining them getting shot in the head. Ohh shooting Zombies is soo good!!
Go play a zombie video game, maybe that will boost your ideas for your story :

Did you get your writers block unblocked yet? It's been awhile since the last part. Just wondering if youre still trying to work on it.

Zzzzzzzzzz *snort* Bluh?

Oh wow I havent been on Unexplained for uhhh..... Quite a while....

I might try and work on it soon..... But High School has been eating my soul...

This is just a geuss. Boi-can Deathrising:a story untold.