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sheila12
Where Do I belong?
Do I truly have friends
Will I ever be accepted
Does anyone truly care

Why do I feel this way
Where do I belong?
kikuchiyo
It's nice and short. I'm no poetry expert but the rythm is a little off. For the "Does anyone truly care about me" i would cut the "about me" it will give it a better "beat". Although it is self expression and the only true judge here is you.
sheila12
thanks for the tip.
Mr Ed
It gives people a very, very good idea of what you are like. I suppose that is its aim.

Probably better than some of the stuff I could write, I am not so great at poetry, writing fiction comes easier to me.
101
I love it. It is cute.

I care about you.
sheila12
thanks for liking everyone.
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