This is an attempt at a peom CC welcome

Sniper

One shot one kill, that is the snipers word
Through the cross hairs hes mark lie
Squeezing the trigger the bullet fly
Striker the mark between the eyes
One shot one kill, that is the snipers word

~Thanato

The poem's pretty good; but trust me..You have got to change the title of this thread..

aww Falco....you beat me to it.....

I liked it, Thanato!

Listen to the words of Falco, Title of this thread needs changing but other than that pretty good but not very in depth or exciting you have stated the obvious of a Sniper role perhaps start to concentrate and add the control breathing a Sniper has with the trigger pull and how he relies also on outside elements to influnece the aim?

Yes I was thinking the same thing "my little thing" lol. I was wondering what it was. Well great advertising. It made me look.


I liked it. Your poem was great.

Nice writing, good word choice.

i dont know if this is a poem, because the one i first made might of been a one hit wonder. so CC is welcome.

Retreat

Retreating is something no soldier wants to do
Falling back to the safety of the line
Explosions ring out in the darkness of the sky
Screams approach, both man and beast
Silence strikes
The poor sole falls limp to the ground
In war there is no safety in the line

im not sure if thats a poem, but i tryed.

~Thanato

I wrote a story of a sniper a couple of pages back. It's called 'Through the scope' - At least I think thats what it's called.