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Me
By Benjamin L. Høgh
Who am I?
What am I?
I am a shadow
A memory that has never been
An echo from a distant past
A thought in a ocean of emotions
A tear that has never been shed
Hidden behind a smiling face
My spirit and soul has long since vanished
All I have is bitterness and hate
I never wanted this to be
A life I never asked for
I ended as I begun
I never should have started
I cling to the hope that is left
But every time it fail, I fall
Deeper into blackness, deeper into nothing
Losing a little of myself
Don’t know how much longer I can fall
Don’t know how much there is left of me
What am I?
I am nothing
I don’t exist……
Not any more
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