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Needles
Benjamin L. Høgh

A thousand needles pierce my heart
Totured without end
I lie, trying to hear the emptiness that I feel
The silence is unbearable, I scream

A light shines through my darkened veil
I rise from the shadows to see
That the world is beautiful, complex and careless
For the first time in my life I feel free

A quick smile pass my face
The first in rememberable times
But I know in my heart that this will not last
Everything is destined to wither and die

A lightning strikes from the clear summer night
I fall back in my pit of sadness and despair
All there is left is hopelessness, I exist no more
A thousand needles pierce my heart


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