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Yasha
Ok, this is what i remember of it.. didn't post it when i made it cause i was off UM.. but what I remember..

Darkness is a monstrous entity
It's power grasps the unsuspecting
Ablaze with rage and torment
An omnipotent being from beyond.


well? wrote that for school... very hard to remember line 3... So i made a new one... but I remember the old was better no.gif

EDIT: ***A*** monstrous entity...
arwenpotter
Third line is good but I think perhaps it needs just one or two more syllables to run smoothly?

and it's A monstrous entity tongue.gif

Edit: and yes I'm starting your sig now original.gif Just finished my current project, then I have to do Brookes brett lee head... *head spins*
Yasha
QUOTE(arwenpotter @ Jul 27 2005, 05:16 AM)
Third line is good but I think perhaps it needs just one or two more syllables to run smoothly?

and it's A monstrous entity tongue.gif

Edit: and yes I'm starting your sig now original.gif Just finished my current project, then I have to do Brookes brett lee head... *head spins*
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Hey it was 4am when I posted this...Yes that's the only time I could remember to... cut me some slack here! tongue.gif

And yes the third line needs to be fixed... did you find it? tongue.gif hehe

And no rush on the sig, thanks.
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