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Yasha

Jul 27 2005, 08:00 AM

Ok, this is what i remember of it.. didn't post it when i made it cause i was off UM.. but what I remember..

Darkness is a monstrous entity
It's power grasps the unsuspecting
Ablaze with rage and torment
An omnipotent being from beyond.

well? wrote that for school... very hard to remember line 3... So i made a new one... but I remember the old was better

EDIT: ***A*** monstrous entity...

arwenpotter

Jul 27 2005, 09:16 AM

Third line is good but I think perhaps it needs just one or two more syllables to run smoothly?

and it's A monstrous entity

Edit: and yes I'm starting your sig now

Just finished my current project, then I have to do Brookes brett lee head... *head spins*

Yasha

Jul 27 2005, 05:50 PM

QUOTE(arwenpotter @ Jul 27 2005, 05:16 AM)

Third line is good but I think perhaps it needs just one or two more syllables to run smoothly?

and it's A monstrous entity

Edit: and yes I'm starting your sig now

Just finished my current project, then I have to do Brookes brett lee head... *head spins*
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Hey it was 4am when I posted this...Yes that's the only time I could remember to... cut me some slack here!

And yes the third line needs to be fixed... did you find it?

hehe

And no rush on the sig, thanks.

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