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the little boy is very scary they say there was a little boy and he went to look for his brother in the forest he was calling he brother's name and no one answer they said the little boy was about 5 and he said he wasnt scared of nothing while he was looking for his brother he heard some one calling so he follow the voice when he got there he saw there where crows everywhere and he was in the middle he didnt move but then he saw one of the crows called his name he thougth it was a joke but it wasnt he turn around and saw his brother in a tree hanging there he saw him he was dead!the little boy didnt move and suddenly all the crows got him by his clothes and and put him on a tree they started biting him and he couldnt move then he fell from the tree and drop dead all the crows got on top off him and all you could see was a black something but then they pick him up and where part of him he look like a black wing angel he was still dead but the crows put there souls in him they say thta if you go to a forest and here a crow you should run away or he'll kill someone in my friend's family was a victim they say he doesnt attack kids only adults and animals let him be somewhere away from here
Next time you post a story, PLEASE remember full stops. It's hard to read. Anywho this just seems like a weird made-up story.
uh?i repeat, uh?
thats a pile of feaces!
well thats how my friend told me the story
thats how my friend told it to me
QUOTE(Moose-Of-Armageddon @ Aug 4 2005, 08:54 PM)
Next time you post a story, PLEASE remember full stops. It's hard to read.
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WORD, i`d had to read it more than twice to get something reasonable out of it.
but thats just me and apparently my bad english...
thanks for posting in each one i write in
come on, guys. Relax with the harshness. Nobody here knows this dude or what his story is...
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they say he doesnt attack kids only adults
but wern't they talking about a kid getting attacked? I'm confused
yes they are and how they called him the little boy
So a little boy got eaten by crows after his friend hung himself. And now the crows won't attack kids; they will only attack adults. And if you hear a crow in the woods, run away before they do something to your friend's family?
Definately an urban (or rural since we're in the woods) legend. Haven't you ever heard a crow caw without anything happen? Goodness, they flock around my house and in the local park - hear them all the time.
Definately an urban (or rural since we're in the woods) legend. Haven't you ever heard a crow caw without anything happen? Goodness, they flock around my house and in the local park - hear them all the time.
ah run on sentences! they drive me insane! actually that wasnt a run on sentence, just no punctuation in there at all. 
Okay now I'm confused. 
So will the crows only attack adults and not children? Or will they only attack children and not adults? I don't think I even read that part! Well I never heard of this urban legend before. So I'm going to have to say it was defiantly fake.
So will the crows only attack adults and not children? Or will they only attack children and not adults? I don't think I even read that part! Well I never heard of this urban legend before. So I'm going to have to say it was defiantly fake.
QUOTE(Deaths Hand @ Aug 4 2005, 08:14 PM)
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Lies! He used an exclamation point in the middle of the thing. I stopped reading after about the second line because it just isn't worth my time to try to comprehend.
I'm sure it's an interesting story though.
look people please calm down, there i used a comma i'[m not good in puntucating i cant even spell it so just leave this forum if yall dont like it thanks for everyhting any ways
It's the Birds guys! sorry I couldn't resist. i still don't get why it only attacks adults
ok ok eveyrbody listen up the crows didnt have no more control of the little boy he had it, he kill adults because he was angry that his parents made him look for his brother and not them i didn't put this cause i tougth no one would care about this part are yall happy.
Ok, this STORY (an important word i feel) doesnt really make sense at all.. sorry.
No offense to the author of this piece, but it reads like it was written by a third grade elementary student.
But, I would recommend that you continue your literary efforts, and in time, you may well become an adequate writer.
But, I would recommend that you continue your literary efforts, and in time, you may well become an adequate writer.
Well if it is an Urban Legend, I've never heard of it.
Somewhat interesting . .
Somewhat interesting . .
this forum is just so awesome, rofl
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...so just leave this forum if yall dont like it
...Was there really any need for that?
No offence to the author, be it you or your friend, but the story could use more of a structure. It very much feels like it was written on the spot with no prior planning - which isn't nessecerily a bad thing, but only if you can pull it off, and you can't.
Secondly, correct grammar and spelling is the internets equiv-e-lant of manners. It's impolite to spell incorrectly, type all in capitals or use bad grammar and punctuation on the internet - There, I said it.
And finally, if this is a story then it should be posted in the writers section
Its an intresting story but I don't think its real.
well hey walken i guess you just come to correct me and not say a hello all those messages i wrote you
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well hey walken i guess you just come to correct me and not say a hello all those messages i wrote you
I assure you, my corrections are in your best interests - People on the forum will take you a lot more seriously, if you use correct online manners.
Marc, I didn't even notice this was your thread until recently.
And finally, if you send me a PM saying Hello I'll be sure to reply, but do not expect me to engage in pages and pages of dicussion with you - Thats not what I visit UM.
look i'm sorry but you forgot my name marc whois that look i'm sorry thanks anyways
Learn. To. Use. Punctuation. Please?
Good Story, Though i dont think it is real
Best Thread EVER!!!!
I think the story was pretty good all it needed was a bit of punctuation.
QUOTE(mauricio @ Aug 4 2005, 02:26 PM)
the little boy is very scary they say there was a little boy and he went to look for his brother in the forest he was calling he brother's name and no one answer they said the little boy was about 5 and he said he wasnt scared of nothing while he was looking for his brother he heard some one calling so he follow the voice when he got there he saw there where crows everywhere and he was in the middle he didnt move but then he saw one of the crows called his name he thougth it was a joke but it wasnt he turn around and saw his brother in a tree hanging there he saw him he was dead!the little boy didnt move and suddenly all the crows got him by his clothes and and put him on a tree they started biting him and he couldnt move then he fell from the tree and drop dead all the crows got on top off him and all you could see was a black something but then they pick him up and where part of him he look like a black wing angel he was still dead but the crows put there souls in him they say thta if you go to a forest and here a crow you should run away or he'll kill someone in my friend's family was a victim they say he doesnt attack kids only adults and animals let him be somewhere away from here
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Wow. I'm more scard of your run on sentence.
i tihnk its fake for one, how u noe the kid is 5? a five year old is scared NEVER heard of one that isnt scared just simply the dark,and how you know its crows? and that his bro/friend was hung? did the "little boy" tell you/friend? how you know it was crows? prob some psycho if they DID die
you people have issues 
but about the story, wellll. . . its funky probably one of those storys that you need to tell at sleepovers or but the campfire 
but about the story, wellll. . . its funky probably one of those storys that you need to tell at sleepovers or but the campfire
something tells me this is fake. But if it wasn't 
I will check crows carefully.
I will check crows carefully.
well yes i admit i do need punctuation sorry 
but thanks anyways
but thanks anyways
hey guys anymore things
^ PLEASE don't post on a thread with useless comments simply to up your post count...it is unnecessary and rude
I think the story was bogus. I think it was fake but hey that is just me
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Its an intresting story but I don't think its real.
No deves de escriber nada aqui si no puedes escriber..Todo's aqui son muchos de pendehos, y no mas estan borrlando de usted.....Ves Como yo no puedo escriber bien tam poco
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No deves de escriber nada aqui si no puedes escriber..Todo's aqui son muchos de pendehos, y no mas estan borrlando de usted.....Ves Como yo no puedo escriber bien tam poco
Sorry I hit the wrong reply button..I meant to tell the guy who wrote this storie that he shouldn't attempt to write a story without some good help.
If I wasnt at work, Id say someone must have slipped me some crack.
hmmm whos "he"??? i seem to recall you writing "he" doesent only attack kids...
Maybe you meant the crows? or the kid? But if its the kid isnt he dead(hauntings section) ? or a zombie(paranormal section) ?? tell me please?
anyone?.....
Maybe you meant the crows? or the kid? But if its the kid isnt he dead(hauntings section) ? or a zombie(paranormal section) ?? tell me please?
anyone?.....
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look people please calm down, there i used a comma i'[m not good in puntucating i cant even spell it so just leave this forum if yall dont like it thanks for everyhting any ways
Your name is one of my favorites. The actor Billy Zane played a charachter with the name Mauricio in the film Million's and I have loved it ever since. Dont worry about the punctuation thing, Iam terrible at it and so what. Good story cause it kind of creeped me out the way it all ran together like that it seemed to keep going faster and faster and all out of control or something and now Iam rambling and cant find the period button.
Bye Mauricio
^o^ Sounds fake I guess...Where did your friend hear it?
A lot of young people commit suicide and it's really not cool...
as for the crows, they are known to eat dead flesh as most carnivorous birds do but I've never heard of crows eating someone alive...
Good story though!
Sounds like a Edgar Allen Poe poem.
Everyone stop picking on people for spelling on grammar, maybe it's easy for you but a lot of people find it difficult.
A lot of young people commit suicide and it's really not cool...
as for the crows, they are known to eat dead flesh as most carnivorous birds do but I've never heard of crows eating someone alive...
Good story though!
Sounds like a Edgar Allen Poe poem.
Everyone stop picking on people for spelling on grammar, maybe it's easy for you but a lot of people find it difficult.
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^ PLEASE don't post on a thread with useless comments simply to up your post count...it is unnecessary and rude
perhap's he isnt like that and just wants more feedback for his story. Not all of us poster's are count/stat driven demons . Just who is being Rude here anyway?
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