this is the most sutable place i could find, mods if u think this is in wrong place please move..

Jenny was so happy about the house they had found. For once in her life 'twas on the right side of town. She unpacked her things with such great ease. As she watched her new curtains blow in the breeze. How wonderful it was to have her own room. School would be starting; she'd have friends over soon. There'd be sleep-overs, and parties; she was so happy It's just the way she wanted her life to be. On the first day of school, everything went great. She made new friends and even got a date! She thought, "I want to be popular and I'm going to be, Because I just got a date with the star of the team!" To be known in this school you had to have clout, And dating this guy would sure help her out. There was only one problem stopping her fate. Her parents had said she was too young to date. "Well I just won't tell them the entire truth. They won't know the difference; what's there to lose?" Jenny asked to stay with her friends that night. Her parents frowned but said, "All right." Excited, she got ready for the big event But as she rushed around like she had no sense, She began to feel guilty about all the lies, But what's a pizza, a party, and a moonlight ride? Well the pizza was good, and the party was great, But the moonlight ride would have to wait. For Dan was half drunk by this time. But he kissed her and said that he was just fine. Then the room filled with smoked and Dan took a puff. Jenny couldn't believe he was smoking that stuff. Now Dan was ready to ride to the point But only after he'd smoked another joint. They jumped in the car for the moonlight ride, Not thinking that he was too drunk to drive. They finally made it to the point at last, And Dan started trying to make a pass. A pass is not what Jenny wanted at all (and by a pass, I don't mean playing football.) "Perhaps my parents were right....maybe I am too young. Boy, how could I ever, ever be so dumb." With all of her might, she pushed Dan away: "Please take me home, I don't want to stay." Dan cranked up the engine and floored the gas. In a matter of seconds they were going too fast. As Dan drove on in a fit of wild anger, Jenny knew that her life was in danger. She begged and pleaded for him to slow down, But he just got faster as they neared the town. "Just let me get home! I'll confess that I lied. I really went out for a moonlight ride." Then all of a sudden, she saw a big flash. "Oh God, Please help us! We're going to crash!" She doesn't remember the force of impact. Just that everything all of a sudden went black. She felt someone remove her from the twisted rubble, And heard, "call an ambulance! These kids are in trouble! Voices she heard...a few words at best. But she knew there were two cars involved in the wreck. Then wondered to herself if Dan was all right, And if the people in the other car was alive. She awoke in the hospital to faces so sad. "You've been in a wreck and it looks pretty bad." These voices echoed inside her head, As they gently told her that Dan was dead. They said "Jenny, we've done all we can do. But it looks as if we'll lose you too." "But the people in the other car!?" Jenny cried. "We're sorry, Jenny, they also died." Jenny prayed, "God, forgive me for what I've done I only wanted to have just one night of fun." "Tell those people's family, I've made their lives dim, And wish I could return their families to them." "Tell Mom and Dad I'm sorry I lied, And that it's my fault so many have died. Oh, nurse, won't you please tell them that for me?" The nurse just stood there-she never agreed. But took Jenny's hand with tears in her eyes. And a few moments later Jenny died. A man asked the nurse, "Why didn't you do your best To bid that girl her one last request?" She looked at the man with eyes so sad. "Because the people in the other car were her mom and dad." This story is sad and unpleasant but true, So young people take heed, it could have been you.


i found in a website, it is sad ...wel to me it was

A nice script for some sobbing drama
Cool coincidence by the way. Perfect for us naughty mizanthropes

I would have sympathized so much better if it weren't for the annoying rhyming. but yes, that is truly awful.

So that was true? Damn thats unlucky.
"Don't drink and drive kids"

Pass the tissues, please!!!

That is very, very sad. I couldn't begin to imagine. But everyone thinks, "It'll never happen to me." Well, for every time you say or think that...your time will come. Be it your fault or someone else's, if drinking & driving continues.

I find it odd that we are still harping on people NOT TO drink & drive. I've been saying it since Christmas Eve of 1975!!! This is when my Grandma was darned near killed by a drunk driver. She nearly lost both legs & her left arm, she was put back together with pins, rods & screws. Him? A slight concussion was all he had!!!!

40nrockinon

I've read that before on another site ... ironic really, as the site's name starts with "funny".

Yeah, that's sad.

http://funnyjunk.com/pages/cry.html

heres were i found it, but i copy and paste because i dont think it was really funny....

Hang on, I don't understand why her parents were in the car if she had gone out to a party.
Maybe I missed something.

thats on funnyjunk.com

MR. Ed , her parents were not in HER car, they weere in TWO different cars
the girl and her boyfriend were in Car A, and her parents were in car B
Car A , and Car B crashed

U mean dont smoke 2 joints while drunk then drive

that was so sad it was obvious that the other people were her parents though

I prefer Yu-Gi-Oh!

I heard that somewhere else....i was just STUNNED. WoW.
don't drink and drive, peeps.

i told you its from funnyjunk.com but i thought it wasnt funny, so i just copy and paste...

Pretty sucky for them...

So this is true right, so how come the spoke in rhymes?
I know if I was in that situation I wouldn't be Rhyming. (more screaming an crying)

you are rhytming , in the website it says it was true , i belive it could happen

I dont know why it makes me rewmber of a Chick Track. Almost the same "moral mensage".

Ah ok, thanks .

^ Lmao, you dumb-arse!

i didnt like they rhymes

ooooooooooooooooooooooooooo. I found it funny, coz of the irony in it

that is THE WORST anti-pot anti-drinking message ever. who comes up with this crap? i'm so sure, poor little jenny, boo-hoo. if only she had been the good christian mommy and daddy raised her to be, no drinking, no drugs, no sex, no boys, no shorts, no lipstick, no makeup, no swearing, no "dirty" thoughts, no holding hands, no staying up late, no talking on the phone after 8, do all your homework, dont sass me, say your prayers, you have a period becuase your a sinner, repent, repent! if only she would have listened, then, only then, would she not have coincidently been in the car wreck that killed her, some date-rape fool, and her loving and perfect mom and dad all at the same time. sheesh. again: poor jenny, boo-hoo. nice stroy. bad rhymes. they need a little help from busta-rhymes or j5 or sumthin.

I remember that it was going around the net a few years ago. Sad story, kind of like the Twilight Zone episode where the guy gets off the train in Whimbly(sp). Sad on one level, funny as H*ll on another.

Is it really true ? Yeh its a pretty sad story with a clear warning.

and which one would that be? be a good catholic girl who can't think with her own head?

i think it's better that they all died instead of just some of them,cos there's a lot less pain this way...but i don't think the story's true...

The story itself is good, but the poem format somehow demeans the message.

Maybe he should have just smoked the joints and not drink no alcohol and he would have driven realllllyy slow...

no crying here. as the sayings go "SNAFU", "when you least expect it, expect it.", "that's life"...

and most importantly (although i loath the source) "save the drama for your mamma".

That girl was a moron. All she wanted was popularity. She made a stupid mistake, and paid the price for it. Yes, I admit it was sad, but I find it hard to sympathize with a girl like that.

Guess what! That's a god damn chain!
I was crying purely because I hate chains.

Of course it's not true Don't be absolutely daft. Let's tear it limb from limb, shall we?

1 - How would anyone who wrote it have even the slighest idea what was going through Jenny's head throughout the whole scenario? She's dead, and can't exactly relate it all.

2 - How would anyone who wrote it have any idea that the guy she went out with (the family of whom would probably be sueing right about now) tried to force a pass on her? He's dead too.

3 - A story like that would be hardcore ammunition for the antiu-drink and drug groups. It would have been shoved down our throats a million times over, and in a far, far better format than a poorly worded nursery ryhm.

4 - It bears the hallmarks of a typical urban legend - no place names, no dates, nothing that could identify it so we could try and track it down in from a local newspaper. In other words, some cretin made it up, and even subjected us to their horrible ryhming.

At most, it might have been inspired by a footnote in a newspaper somewhere, that some religious loony jumped on, and decided to ruthlessly twist to tell the story they wanted, so all the little girls would...actually, summed up quite well here...



Thanks for that

Thank you. I needed that, lol.

I have certainly missed the Princess tearing ' limb from limb'! Welcome back Sera.

I'm glad for that Joc I only came back, after all, to bring a smile to your face

I laughed soo hard nice story

That story literally made me cry. True or not, that is depressing as possible.

Good story...Sad, but good.

boring story

Hail to the necromancer supreme! Two years almost... That's quite the accomplishment.
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As for the story... I like the poetic way in which it was told. But it didn't make me cry.

Didn't like it. Didn't make me cry either. Shes laying there saying its her fault before she dies and really its the dumb butt drunk, who would have prolly done the same dang thing if she had turned him down BEFORE they left the party. And maybe the 'rents should have gave a crap, called the person she was staying with, and why do I get the feeling no one ever told her don't drive around with drunk people? Well maybe in the 80s... my 5 year old knows better. Real sob story, meant to scare teens into being good and all that jazz. Nothing else to say, could be here all night otherwise.

I read a variation of this story where there are two people... I don't remember what the automobile was, but I think it involved the brakes not working and at the end, it was revealed that the man sacrificed his life to save the woman.

Well, actually it wasn't funny...even though I doubt if it was true...Where I live, there have been numerous car accidents, with teenagers involved, some being fatal...So anything like this, whether true or false, should leave some kind of an impact on what not to do...So funny, no, but looking at it and knowing that this can happen, well then thats sad...

True or not yes it was sad.

I think we are missing the point and that is if you dont want to have sex then dont freaking go to a secluded place. WHat did she think they where going to do their play scrabble? I mean she is the cause of the accident not alchohol or drugs its a case of BLUE BALLED.

Lol this almost made me cry

oh like physics! cool! anyway that was a sad story...

Yes, shes the cause, shes a woman, and because she turned him down he was FORCED to fly into a rage and shes really just lucky because he should have beat her right then and there for being a filthy woman, right? Come on... you really believe it was her fault he was a drunken pothead who can't take rejection? Yeah, sure, she shouldn't have GONE in the first place, but she didn't step on the dang gas cause HE turned HER down, now did she? Oh, no, the weaker sex should take the fall for all the violent acts of men!!

And again, if the guy was a drug addict alchy, he prolly would have killed someone sooner or later, with or without the girl. I'm starting to hate this story... degrades women more then the bible does.

don't be mad. there's no such things as weaker sex. change your view about the topic. and 1st of all it's just a story.
no offense.

Again if she did not want to have sex she should not go with him to a secluded place. Second a Males top priority is to spread his sead and its insticntual to be pretty upset by being led on especially a top athlete by a little new girl. I am sorry Alchohol and drugs did not cause the accident anger did, anger which she caused