I was upset when I wrote this but I hope you like it anyway.

Forgive my broken promises
They are mearly hollowed dreams
Forgive my sullen unwillingness
I'm in water to my knees
Love my ancient speaking
It's written with all my heart
Love my empty eyes
They possess all that I have
Forget me when I'm given to the ground
I'm not much to remember
Forget my last words
They will mean nothing but my end
Do not light a flame for me
My soul will never wander
Do not seek in the vast world for me
It will be heaven that I am fonder
Give my lonely memory to the crashing sea
I'll spend more time there it's always been a part of me
Give my beaten heart to the golden sky
And I'll beg you not to to stand over my grave and cry...

Whoa . . . .

While reading that, two songs popped into my mind . . "Travelers Lantern" by Dwight Yoakam & "Go Rest High On That Mountain" by Vince Gill.

Great poem, you definitely have a talent! Keep it up!!

That's really beautiful.

Excellent prose. Don't stop writing.

XD guess i'm not as bad as i thought i was, thanks!



^^ thanks so much!

that is so beautiful and moving

^^ THANKSNESS