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cloud_dancer
I see your beautiful blue eyes
gazing up at me
i hear your contented
sigh as you snuggle
in my lap
i feel the weight of you
as you sit yourself
more comfortably
close to me
my heart is overwhelmed
with love for you
my precious boy
and i know that no
matter how big you grow
you will always be
my baby
my little one
mad inventor
a mothers love through and through.......well done cloud dancer
cloud_dancer
Thanks Mad inventor grin2.gif
Daughter of the Nine Moons
Thats absolutely lovely cloud dancer original.gif
cloud_dancer
Thank you Daughter of the Nine Moons, original.gif it's lovely getting feedback about what i write
nativechick1989
Such a beautiful poem! original.gif
cloud_dancer
Thanks nativechick original.gif i wrote it for my youngest son who i nicknamed little one,
Kryso
As I keep saying, I’m not a great poem fan, but I do comment on ones that are moving! And yours is. Impressive.
shanahan2300
very moving cloud dancer.....and it will never change, my son is 28 and I still feel that way wub.gif
_hAiLO_
I love your poem original.gif . Very well gives me a warm point of view of a very loving parent.
cloud_dancer
Thank you so much, Kryso, Shanahan, and hAiLO, it means such alot to mean to recieve comments like yours. original.gif
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