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Dan_27
Sojourn 2


Treading the path of unknown directions. Numerous illusions weaving the tapestry of daily life. Not knowing where to turn, only the heart compass hears a far off call.

A glimpse of the unknown Master, perplexed by feelings of familiarity. The great tribulation, as distant as another world; as near as ones own skin. Unable to awaken in the maze, knowing only that there is a higher purpose. The only recourse, to continue down the path.

Hardships falling in waves, dream beyond dream, maze beyond maze. Innumerable distractions, terrors beyond words. Evil paths abound, charlatans, and deceivers; no one knows the true way. The only wish; to benefit others, not knowing how.

How many times have I heard the call? The Master is waiting.

Beckys_Mom
QUOTE(Dan_27 @ Nov 13 2005, 07:26 AM) [snapback]929634[/snapback]

Sojourn 2
Treading the path of unknown directions. Numerous illusions weaving the tapestry of daily life. Not knowing where to turn, only the heart compass hears a far off call.

A glimpse of the unknown Master, perplexed by feelings of familiarity. The great tribulation, as distant as another world; as near as ones own skin. Unable to awaken in the maze, knowing only that there is a higher purpose. The only recourse, to continue down the path.

Hardships falling in waves, dream beyond dream, maze beyond maze. Innumerable distractions, terrors beyond words. Evil paths abound, charlatans, and deceivers; no one knows the true way. The only wish; to benefit others, not knowing how.

How many times have I heard the call? The Master is waiting.



ohmy.gif That's really well written.

If you were to transform it into a story, I for one would find it intresting to read.
You probably have done, but it's my first time entering this board and this is the 1st thing I have read so far. original.gif
BigDaddy_GFS
Very nice. I'm impressed.
nativechick1989
Another Good Poem, Dan 27!!

Keep up the good work! original.gif
Dan_27
Actually I wrote all of these poems some time ago. I'm just not going to post all of them at once.

Dan.
Yelekiah
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Hardships falling in waves, dream beyond dream

I like this. Excellent prose, keep up the good work.
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