"A world apart"
By P.Flack
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Many a thread sewn, a stone thrown
Single a king, a mote no dragon has known.

A throne, a waters' flush, Hells' blush shy of Heaven
A numbers' faltering single, fires' flow from seven.

Tears of an eye count, inside from out
Voices of a mind, find reason to shout.

The quietest of silent, golden is the castle
The loudest noise, brings least of the hastle.

Stillness still moving, noticed do we see
Let it be known it moves, this drawbridge reality.

When once you find, at least what's lost
You pay priceless the unmeasurable, this cost.

If you find me standing, see this sword, this hand in heart
No sleeve carries, few this weight, this world

APART.

It's O.K. to talk about my poems you know, please don't be shy. Every time I put something out there's no criticism, comments, thoughts, reflections, words, or anything... Don't be afraid of me either-

It's O.K. allright??

Good poem I'm not really any good at them myself so I can appreciate it when someone can do them.

I like it, its different and innovative... what inspired you?

^^Thank you

^Thanks, it was about like being the king of your own domain - having no Queen, nothing but pure absolute sadness, and two dragons in the mote protecting you from the enemy. When really your the one protecting them by giving them a home, and the mote is big enough for two. When they are more in love than you are, and they keep you from being so angry with yourself over it- you wear your heart on your sleeve, and weild no sword towards any enemy in the process. Like a poetic justice.

Thanks again.

-PF

AWESOME! Thats so deep and metaforical, I love it!!

it's pretty sad, though, without a queen.Just ask the Royal Family in Britain....
just think, without ye olde Lizzy, Charles would be King of Olde America

Thanks! I am a metaphorist - coming up with more work soon...

Yeah. It's a Led Zeppelin song "Going to California" and Diana's wierd accident with papparazi hunting her down for just a photo. Then --- smack - she's dead-

very good, I like that alot!

'The quietest of the silent, golden the castle,
the loudest noise, brings the least of the hastle.'


Think about this: 'silence is golden'- the King alone in a gold castle, no Queen, silent but still very wise to the dragons. Like a Yin Yang from the Kings mind, the two dragons have the male/female significance - and make the most noise. It's a peculiar way of seeing this 'King' isn't bothered by the dragons, and all of the racket on the outside, the firebreathing, & fighting off the enemy with the least of the hastle to burden him...