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L815

Mar 1 2006, 07:55 PM

So much, I dislike this place
Monotonous as the sea
Mysterious, cold, and deep
Plunge down, fearfull of one, but all

Breathless as the soul
Between the sounds of beauty
I discordantly shiver

Comments welcome, encouraged.

STIX

Mar 15 2006, 08:21 PM

I like it...

great imagry

That last verse is amazing!

Yelekiah

Mar 15 2006, 11:01 PM

I like "breathless as the soul".

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