"Internettable" - by P.Flack
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All kinds in binds, wind down in the grinds, finding themselves smiling
kept in secret fettering wet dreams.

Let in steams, and sign in all the pleasing sights, no shackled bytes, got no
gripes in spackled sprites of sparks.

The lack of the stack, parks the nights in heckled types, get no fights- easing
all the lined up teams they let in.

Dry enough to be awake in, exposed lettering- letting go of the finds, signing a frown
in times the megabytes arent all kind in this bind.

"Fettering wet dreams" and "no shackled bytes" I liked. Good imagery and personification. Keep up the good work.

Thanks Yele!

i liked it.

Young teens and internet porn? Is that it?

Your wordage makes me smile. The poem is chewy and good - and I'm not being silly or facetious here. Do you understand me?

This line: "no shackled bytes, got no
gripes in spackled sprites of sparks."

Just delicious.
I always look forward to your poems PFlack!

Nah, but it is included, it's more about the combination of all the things in the net good/bad.

You will notice at the end, that there is the 'aren't all kind' where I mean to say that is where alot of the seriously violent f****d up stuff happens. But in that sense, 'aren't kind' goes back to the beginning and goes 'All kinds in binds'.

Meaning no matter what, good, bad, and absolutely psychotic in some serial killer/child molester hatred kind of way, whether I like it or not it still goes on- and I despise it.

So, it is a balance.

Thanks, I am debating on editing a 5 page epic that has alot of that style in it- that I may contribute. But, I have feelings that sometimes when you write these really big epic ones, someone may blackball it. Since it's simplistic. My more complicated ones I have are what I think are less prone for blackballing. I was thinking of giving it a shot though. It's enormous.Theres lot's of metaphoric food/sex/electronic/animalistic combinations in it.