This Boundless Attraction

Oh Attraction!
Glorious Allurement!
How my longing for your kiss
Does enthrall my soul with bliss!

Oh enchantress
Of the most fabulous!
Your lips - Hypnotic Blossoms.
You, darling - A Dazzling Dream.

The sky collapses
Away from all darkness.
A pupil so beautiful,
So deep and conscious.

This blue rivals beauty
At its most prominent elegance.
Your eyes - My world.
My past - Irrelevant!

How your graceful stare
Does infect my heart.
An aristocracy
Among infatuation!


Thrust forth
into never-known places,
My soul splits
into infinite traces,
Each piece transcends
to a finite delicacy,
A feeling, so large,
so small, so heavenly!

I am but a blessed mortal
In this boundless scape...
This euphoric paradise.

As we dance,
With limbs entangled,
How my soul does swell
How my fears do quell
When engaged with the stare
of such an astounding angel!

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Wow!!!.......thats beautiful.
If a guy wrote me a poem like that,
I know he would have my heart.
if only, if only!!!

Thank you thank you thank you!!

I don't really want to have her heart based off a poem... I'd rather it be based off the time we spend together... this was just inspired from our date last night...

The ending is the best I think... it really captures my feelings for her!

did you write that poem?

This one I can figure out. He got lucky.

Wow . . . what an awesome poem . . .

YUP!



YEAH!! I AM THE LUCKIEST MAN ALIVE!!

Its so beautiful, I wish my guys would write me peoms.

WOW... you're a LOVER ... and a KEEPER !!.... got all us ladies drooling over here hehe

Hehe... I write it for all the woman of earth!!