Hallucinations

My loathsome petition grows with each day.
Each time I retreat to the subconscious
I awake with more affliction,
A swelling more than ever before.

A passion un-withering between moments so dreary
and dull like a rusty blade,
in the darkness of the moonlight.
I penetrate atmospheres with intentions
unlike any known before.

My lovesick woe grows with each passing instant.
Each time reality flickers
between extinction and existance,
I am reborn with ever more euphoria.
A swelling more - unlike any before.

In instants I am transposed onto backdrops unknown,
Your face like a silhouette of anguish to my soul
My eroticism disposed has grown to explode!
As my Passion condenses into furious action,
I penetrate your atmosphere with my animosity,
Inhale your soul, defile your morality.

I become all that you said I was,
A liar,
A cheat,
Your one and only...

Now my dear, you are my one
You are my only...
We will dance together in this Moonlight so dreary
Our Love(hate) has become forever and more
For these moments have become our eternities
A Heaven(hell) for our dreary hearts to reside,
Forever our temptation,
Forever our passion so deep...
Forever,
This wretched rusty blade.

well then, that's deep. i like it.

Thanks alot!

Its like.... Love-hate relationships that end in murder-suicide

Reminds me of my ex-husband.

Like this line: I penetrate atmospheres with intentions -- sounds supremely evil.

Good stuff.... Inspiring me to try poetry again...

thanks

Yah that narrator is tragically evil...

It doesn't necessarilly end in suicide... not even murder (although it can if you want it to)... but the last verse is definitly about the afterlife.

Yeah, well that part doesn't remind me of my ex... since I'm obviously not dead.

Great stuff.

one day you will be...

and so will your ex...

Maybe after we die, all we have is our moments in life.