"Invisible Girlfriend" - By P.Flack

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I know no one see's what I feel, what we do, you
"over there" and me "here".

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I show low the sun, the waters seas, shut free the new -
cover the sand and see fear.

Torn open tormenter, heroic a natures fate, will lonliness
isolate, shyness a clear sight.

Worn scope bent her, a stoic creature's slate fills this - bates
highness a sheer fight.

A bite might say what feelings possess, a test confessed -
a priest stigmatic.

Cry for shame, mercy sexually, allows a devout cloud -
blocks the eye's ellipser.

Fly or tame, hear or see, hexually a shout loud -
shocks the skies eclipser.

A kisser a breather, tempter, a solace in no solicitater -
face's too late.

A bliss, seether of lent meant her, in holistic traces -
of true fate.

Tarnish mirrors wilder, a mild style, crazed and stirred -
a stewed cinch of a defiler.

Varnish tyranny milder, a wild file, fazed and blurred anewed -
a wrench of the iron piler.

Strayed a smiles way today, tommorow's steering sting -
looking back, thicker than water.

Played in miles a say in delay, sorrow's searing thing -
hooking attack on God's daughter.

Bought in sexes' { edit? } currency, bleeding on the inside -
of the mind's hiding court.

Sought in flexes' { edit? } to flee, feeding onto what to abide -
confiding in bind's too short.

To sort complex, the next of all thing's, these strings behind ego's turn -
thin enough to touch.

Consort and perplex, the sect's of fallings in ease, it brings the sign's churn -
the stuff of dreams --- not too much.

Contain yourself, glassed out sharded, in skirmished versions -
of an unperverted wake.

One stain or shelf, amassed doubt discarded, unfurnished insertions -
off and on an introverted sake.

Solace in serenity, subjected section injected, a detector -
in grains a fossil toils.

So, lessons infinity selected, election infected, an erector -
in pains a hostile foils.

Intrigue in seekers, sleek in the wreak of havos static -
shatter dreams unschemed.

In seige of meeker, sheek in creeks, of maverics hectic batters,
in streams one deemed.

I send this shred, embedded condensing unoffesive disguises -
in evil's demise.

Befriend the misled, shedded on sensing sun off horizon's -
leave ill's suprize.

Tolerate time, spaces edges, incredulous in no incarnate bodily sightful end.

Over hate, I'm in places, in pledges for "us" in no one else's except -
this solidly:

my "invisible girlfriend".



*Note - my "s"es' are a bit off I may need editing help on it - I would appreciate a poetic master on the matter if that is acceptable. I know I was off on plural and sigulair somewhere. Otherwise, I was thinking it turned out good. It's very epic. I hope you enjoyed it, if you did "get it". Thanks for taking time to read it. - PFlack.*

wow...nifty, i like it. dont fully understand it, but what i get of it, i like it.

Well, through it all, I wasn't thinking "nifty" was a word that would cover it, but thanks!

well, imo, nifty is synonymous with keeno, so, it was good.

Keen? Or Kino? I love Canadians, I have so much to figure out still...
Let me say this though, it's about going out with a person in the afterlife because you don't have much choice in the physical. There's alot of suffering, and there isn't much to do about it. So, you get connection another way to help yourself with the lonliness. Even though most people don't see her, I do, that to others is "invisible" but.... not to me.

Nice! I think "keeno" is quite perfecto, eh?

Wicked wording. A wonderful write!

Plus, coool idea

Thank you Stix, but, I don't think of it as an idea - but reality. It's...what I go through... {still need to work on the s's}.

I'm happy to see people are still enjoying this poem. It's a rare one, because I can use one word and the ryhme it with two words before or after. It's cool because it could go on forever - . I wanted to see if I could write one section for a day and just keep it going, to make the longest poem ever. Maybe make 365 sections. But, the real challenge is not using the same word twice.

The real key to writing something like this, is it takes a shorter amount of time for the first section, and twice as long the second time around. - NOT easy...

Are there any requests for interpretations???

OMG!!! I just decided to search "invisible girlfriend", and this popped up.

I, too, have an invisible girlfriend. I fought this entity off at first. But I knew that I wasn't crazy, and finally she was able to convince me that she meant me no harm.

Anyway, maybe later I'll post some of my poetry about her, and some of our exploits...I dunno, I just knew that I had to register on this site to reply to you. I hope you get this message.

My girlfriend and I have been together for 2 years now. I hate it when people call her "imaginary". Of course, she says we've been together for a LOT longer, but trapped here in the temporal, I can't understand it.

One interesting note is that you called your girlfriend "God's daughter". That is an interesting parallel...