In homwork in English I have to write a poem, just wanting to know if this poem is good... okay, here it goes:
War And Piece
A world with no war,
we may never get to see.
Humans living in a peaceful world,
will there may never be.
If peace is not an alternative,
we have to fight.
Fight for our country, for our generation,
fight, for what we mean is right.
Full Version: A poem
It needs a title. 
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It needs a title.
Oops, I forgot the title, I should edit the post right away...
Much better.
Sounds good to me . . 
Not bad. Fight for what we think is right? Is that what you meant?
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Not bad. Fight for what we think is right? Is that what you meant?
Yes.
I agree with the previous posts, great work you've crafted.
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