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Starlyte
I was just wandering if anyone on the forum writes poetry and if so, would you like to share it here? If you don't write then maybe you could post your favorite poem(s). I'll start it off. I wrote this for my boyfriend. wub.gif

Love's Promise

I love thee as the
silvery moon shines
radiant on this night.

The fragrant flowers that
drench the air enveloping me
as does our love's delight.

The way the light does
touch your face,
your eye does eye mine own,

And without saying
a word does send a
message from your soul.

Oh, do please speak!
To hear a word,
just one would be divine.

A promise as constant
as the rising sun
binding our love for all of time.

tendo
yeah, i write poetry too. ive written maybe 20 or so poems, good poems n e way. as of right now i cant share any, as i dont have my journal with me, and im gettin ready to leave.
Mentalcase
Starlyte,


Good thread! I think we may have done this before, but with all the newer members...this should be fine. I'll post a few as well....

It's what you say

Feels like I'm meeting you for the very first time, everyday,
You're feelings keep changing everything,
It's what you say, it's what you do,
It's changing everything, it's changing everything that we must do,

After I meet you a million more times, everyway,
I'm feeling the joy that's inside my soul,
It's what you say, it's what you do,
It's strange in everyway, it's strange in everyway that I once knew,

and I know I need to find my role, I know I need to find my home, I know I will have to find away from you..

This wont be the last time we meet, today,
I'm realizing everything is great,
It's what you don't say, it's what you don't do,
It's driving me insane, it's driving me insane to just know you,



This is actually a song I wrote.
j6p
All I Need is a Grant

I've been in school for eighteen years
They won't keep me no more
In about a week or two
my ass is out the door user posted image

No I never had to work
Daddy did it all
Now he's gone and pulled the plug
I'm feeling kinda small user posted image

Oh all I need is a grant

There are so many mysteries
that I can uncover
Things are lurking in the dark
Waiting for discoveruser posted image

At times my findings may just be outdated
Conclusions might be unrelated
I promise to amend
If you give me one more chance user posted image

Oh all I need is a grant

I promise you my pony tale
will not get in the way
I'll grow a beard to fit the part
Look it's getting longer every dayuser posted image

Without a grant I'll have to work
And that will never do
If I have to get a job
I'll be just like youuser posted image

Oh god, please give me a grant user posted image
Mentalcase
Very creative J6p!! Here's another one...

Radial Sun

In her eyes, Love is growing,
Gental words, Overflowing,
Summertime, The sub is sinking,
Punching out, Now it's we can..

Stay away or to stay together could be the same thing,
I want to stay together,

So sublime, It's overwhelming,
Patients screaming, This is your dream,
With that in mind, I'm doing my own things,
Packing stuff and moving to your dream.


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Phantom
Damn, I wish I could write like that. My poetry, compared to the stuff posted here, sucks oaktree bigtime.

Keep them coming, people. It is appreciated.
Starlyte
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yeah, i write poetry too. ive written maybe 20 or so poems


We look forward to reading them nuthinparanormal.

Mentalcase, you write beautifully! Please post more of you songs/poetry.

j6p, that poem is too funny! Do you have anymore?laugh.gif

Here is another of mine:

LOST SELF

Sometimes I sit and wonder why
This life can be so hard
Just when I think I’ve got it right
Something seems to go wrong.

I try to do all that I can
To make it through the day
But after all is said and done
I’m still in the same awful place.

My temper remains out of control
My thoughts consume my days
I can’t remember the last day that went by
That I didn’t cry or feel shame.

What happened to the girl I knew?
The one I was proud to be
That girl got lost so long ago
I’m afraid I’ll never be set free.
j6p
Yes a very fun thread, I am enjoying this. I have no more poems but I do have a few comments. Starlyte, your poems show me your life. The second poem told me that you were down when you wrote it but the first poem spoke of the deep love that you are capable of. I look forward to reading more.

Mentalcase, your lyrics are haunting. They stand alone but it would be nice hearing the music too.

Phantom, I don't want to hear it. I've read enough of your posts to know that you can write poetry.
Starlyte
And one more before I go home for the weekend:

Thinking of You

When the wind blows
And sings it melodious song,
When the sun shines
And lights up the dark,
When the rain falls
And wets the thirsty earth,
I will think of you.

When the stars twinkle
And dot the midnight sky
When the snow falls
And leaves a blanket winter white,
When the flowers bloom
In scents words cannot describe
I will think of you.

When the day is over
And sleep is on my mind
When the dreams come
And life seems so divine
When I wake up
And face a brand new day
I will be thinking of you.
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theSOURCE
I had to dig this up. I wrote this ditty when I was a teen...many, many years ago.

If only I were made of stone
I'd watch the eons pass
From time primordial - long since gone -
To the future man will surpass.

If I were stone beneath the waves
Of Earth's first living sea
I could have learned how life began
And solved this mystery.

If I were stone I could have seen
When Pharos ruled the land
Then patiently I'd sit and watch
The sphinx reduced to sand.

If I were stone I'd see the night
When stars no longer shine
And all the memories of the world
Would exclusively be mine.

If only I were made of stone
I'd fear not to depart
For when the rains had warn me away
They'd reveal no broken heart.


Come on, Phantom. Let's see your work. It can't suck anymore than this. wink2.gif
theSOURCE
Here's an old song I wrote in the 80's about three wacked people I used to know.

Afterthought

You're destiny cannot be found
In your astrological sign
Yet you base you life on Tarot cards
And the numbers one through nine.

You can hear the spirits speaking
Voices from afar
Still with all this knowledge -
You don't know who you are.

Search the stars and all you'll find
Life is just a state of mind.

You don your boldest attitude
And seek the heat that burns
Another night you play your best
Until the pain returns.

You take a chance with every game
And stand to lose it all
You risk your life to have your fun
But someday you're going to fall.

Count your chips and all you'll find
Life is just a state of mind.

She throws herself at any man
Who'll take her for a ride
She hopes they'll save her from being alone
With her thoughts of suicide.

Different lovers come each night
With one thing on their minds
It's a dangerous race in the fast lane
When you pay no heed to the signs.

Search the wreckage and what you'll find
Love's not just a state of mind.
Rakshasas
Said the poet Dreaming….

It won `t be long now..
Said the Poet dreaming..
The seasons have a way of moving time
And love comes trailing behind.
If the pyramids can withstand the ravages of war and strife..
This silken rope of longing,
Can withstand all eternities, sea storms and the sublime.


It won `t be long now…
Said the Poet dreaming..
Before the charioteer of the forsaken and sorrow
Gallops in a dusty tear of love `s meaning lost.
If the great library and the hanging gardens are wonders to behold
So is this love of mine
With it `s crisscross patterns of passion and soft hearts

It won `t be long now..
Said the poet dreaming..
The ink stains are barely dry
The paper crackling in the heat of the words
I love you
And you are time
Bewilderment
And a living grace to our dreams

What bliss
What equinox
If you were ever mine
Said the poet dreaming
It won `t be long
Love will sweep us both..
Said the poet dreaming..
reese2
Each one of you write beautifully.............. That does take talent, and some of us, just don't have it... I like reading them, and hope there is more to come.


I have my favorites though...... whistling2.gif



Reese
espdracomth
Amazing you all write poems extremely well.I love to read & write poems. Although mine are not anywhere near that good.
soulfire78
Ode to an Interesting Thread

Here I sit for hours,
though there are other things to do.
I swear I'll get up outta' this chair,
and say goodnight to you.

What an interesting thread we weave,
through our desktop voices.
Makes it so difficult to leave,
and answer realtimes choices.

I could stay here all night through.
discussing what may be
But now I must bid adieu
and leave it all to thee.

Good night all:) It's 2am here...and this Little senorita es muy sueno!
snuffypuffer
I used to write poetry, it all sucks. Keep 'em comin folks.
Mentalcase
Cancerish Greed

When will we know this advice sir? when will we be able to see? doing all i can do, cause i can sir, this cancer is inside of me,

Filling my wait with advances, seeing how hard they can be, I know I will you give you a glance sir, a glance of a chance to be free,

I know that your life's a casino, betting a chance on your scene, my soul is a place you can lean on, you can lean on my soul and be seen,

coming on back with avengence, revenge isn't seen on the flee, flip and you will the answers, this cancerish inside is green, this cancerish inside is green, this cancerish inside is green,

When will we need an advisor, when we rise above all and be mean, i try to keep it all defined sir, divition of greed on the scene. divition of greed on the scene. divition of greed on the scene.
j6p
My kick is when I'm moved by words. It's an art to conjure up an emotion just by putting words down in print. I think anybody can get in anothers face and move them with words but to put them in print and cause emotions to stir is an art.
Every poem here does something to me, for instance take Soulfire78. I know the Lady was tired, you can feel her exhaustion but also her interest in reading her friends poems. A battle ensued, "I want to read more, this is mostly good stuff but dam I'm tired...oh well tomorrow's another day. But I can't just shut down, no, I'll leave this little ditty to let everyone know that I enjoyed their work." And "BLAM" out comes this sweet little poem. Thanks Soulfire78.

MC, I already told you what I think of your work and it remains hauntingly mysterious. You do create a mood.

The SOURCE, You piss me off...I am envious of your work. You write the kind of stuff that is easy to read but deep. You write like I would like to write. I'd bet that you are one of "reese2's favorites whistling2.gif "

Thanks again starlyte for starting this great thread and your lovely poems.

theSOURCE
I've really enjoyed reading everyone's works here. All the different styles and messages -- each one unique and special. Good work everybody. Let's see some more. thumbsup.gif
Kismit
I used to write when I was younger . However I won't be posting them here as I feel they allways come out sounding like I have a severe case of middle child syndrome .

Thank you all for posting your poems though ,

Here are a couple of My Favorites ..

Firstly a little Banjo for the Australians in the room , and I'm sorry I only know the first verse ..


I love a sunburnt country, a land of sweeping plains.
Of rugged mountain rangers , of droughts and flooding rains.
I love her blue horizons, I love her jewelled seas .
Her Bueaty and her terror .
The wide brown land for me .....
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Banjo Patterson somehow defined Australia in his poetry a legend in his own right .

and this one an old favorite .........

Aunt Jennifer's Tigers

Aunt Jennifer's tigers prance across a screen,
Bright topaz denizens of a world of green.
They do not fear the men beneath the tree;
They pace in sleek chivalric certainty.

Aunt Jennifer's fingers fluttering through her wool
Find even the ivory needle hard to pull.
The massive weight of Uncle's wedding band
Sits heavily upon Aunt Jennifer's hand.

When Aunt is dead, her terrified hands will lie
Still ringed with ordeals she was mastered by.
The tigers in the panel that she made
Will go on prancing, proud and unafraid.

-- Adrienne Rich

Adrienne Rich was a very gifted poet . Who wrote covertly topics which where highly unpopular in her era . What an absolute legend .
j6p
They were beautiful Kismit, truly. This may not be the same genre but it's Australian and it always perked me up.

Tie Me Kangaroo Down, Sport
By Rolf Harris

There's an old Australian stockman, lying, dying. He gets himself up on one elbow,
turns to his mates, who are gathered round,
and he says:

Watch me wallaby's feed, mate
Watch me wallaby's feed.
They're a dangerous breed, mate
So watch me wallaby's feed.
All together now!

Tie me kangaroo down, sport,
Tie me kangaroo down.
Tie me kangaroo down, sport,
Tie me kangaroo down.

Keep me cockatoo cool, Curl,
Keep me cockatoo cool.
Don't go acting the fool, Curl,
Keep me cockatoo cool.
All together now!

Tie me kangaroo down, sport,
Tie me kangaroo down.
Tie me kangaroo down, sport,
Tie me kangaroo down.

Take me koala back, Jack,
Take me koala back.
He lives out somewhere on the track, Mac,
So take me koala back.
All together now!

Tie me kangaroo down, sport,
Tie me kangaroo down.
Tie me kangaroo down, sport,
Tie me kangaroo down.

Let me aboes go loose, Lou
Let me aboes go loose.
They're of no further use, Lou
So let me aboes go loose.

Tie me kangaroo down, sport,
Tie me kangaroo down.
Tie me kangaroo down, sport,
Tie me kangaroo down.

Mind me platypus duck, Bill,
Mind me platypus duck.
Don't let him go running amuck, Bill,
Mind me platypus duck.
All together now!

Tie me kangaroo down, sport,
Tie me kangaroo down.
Tie me kangaroo down, sport,
Tie me kangaroo down.

Play your didgeridoo, Blue,
Play your didgeridoo.
Keep playing 'til I shoot through, Blue,
Play your didgeridoo.
All together now!

Tie me kangaroo down, sport,
Tie me kangaroo down.
Tie me kangaroo down, sport,
Tie me kangaroo down.

Tan me hide when I'm dead, Fred,
Tan me hide when I'm dead.
So we tanned his hide when he died, Clyde,
And that's it hanging on the shed.
All together now!

Tie me kangaroo down, sport,
Tie me kangaroo down.
Tie me kangaroo down, sport,
Tie me kangaroo down.

Kismit
Awww!! J6 that was Bonza thumbsup.gif it really embodies the national spirit of fighting on don't you think ... huh.gif


Another one ..

The Man from Snowy River
by A. B. "Banjo" Patterson

There was movement at the station, for the word had passed around
That the colt from old Regret had got away,
And had joined the wild bush horses — he was worth a thousand pound,
So all the cracks had gathered to the fray.
All the tried and noted riders from the stations near and far
Had mustered at the homestead overnight,
For the bushmen love hard riding where the wild bush horses are,
And the stock-horse snuffs the battle with delight.

There was Harrison, who made his pile when Pardon won the cup,
The old man with his hair as white as snow;
But few could ride beside him when his blood was fairly up —
He would go wherever horse and man could go.
And Clancy of the Overflow came down to lend a hand,
No better horseman ever held the reins;
For never horse could throw him while the saddle-girths would stand,
He learnt to ride while droving on the plains.

And one was there, a stripling on a small and weedy beast,
He was something like a racehorse undersized,
With a touch of Timor pony — three parts thoroughbred at least —
And such as are by mountain horsemen prized.
He was hard and tough and wiry — just the sort that won’t say die —
There was courage in his quick impatient tread;
And he bore the badge of gameness in his bright and fiery eye,
And the proud and lofty carriage of his head.

But still so slight and weedy, one would doubt his power to stay,
And the old man said, ‘That horse will never do
For a long and tiring gallop — lad, you’d better stop away,
Those hills are far too rough for such as you.’
So he waited sad and wistful — only Clancy stood his friend —
‘I think we ought to let him come,’ he said;
‘I warrant he’ll be with us when he’s wanted at the end,
For both his horse and he are mountain bred.

‘He hails from Snowy River, up by Kosciusko’s side,
Where the hills are twice as steep and twice as rough,
Where a horse’s hoofs strike firelight from the flint stones every stride,
The man that holds his own is good enough.
And the Snowy River riders on the mountains make their home,
Where the river runs those giant hills between;
I have seen full many horsemen since I first commenced to roam,
But nowhere yet such horsemen have I seen.’

So he went — they found the horses by the big mimosa clump —
They raced away towards the mountain’s brow,
And the old man gave his orders, ‘Boys, go at them from the jump,
No use to try for fancy riding now.
And, Clancy, you must wheel them, try and wheel them to the right.
Ride boldly, lad, and never fear the spills,
For never yet was rider that could keep the mob in sight,
If once they gain the shelter of those hills.’

So Clancy rode to wheel them — he was racing on the wing
Where the best and boldest riders take their place,
And he raced his stock-horse past them, and he made the ranges ring
With the stockwhip, as he met them face to face.
Then they halted for a moment, while he swung the dreaded lash,
But they saw their well-loved mountain full in view,
And they charged beneath the stockwhip with a sharp and sudden dash,
And off into the mountain scrub they flew.

Then fast the horsemen followed, where the gorges deep and black
Resounded to the thunder of their tread,
And the stockwhips woke the echoes, and they fiercely answered back
From cliffs and crags that beetled overhead.
And upward, ever upward, the wild horses held their way,
Where mountain ash and kurrajong grew wide;
And the old man muttered fiercely, ‘We may bid the mob good day,
No man can hold them down the other side.’

When they reached the mountain’s summit, even Clancy took a pull,
It well might make the boldest hold their breath,
The wild hop scrub grew thickly, and the hidden ground was full
Of wombat holes, and any slip was death.
But the man from Snowy River let the pony have his head,
And he swung his stockwhip round and gave a cheer,
And he raced him down the mountain like a torrent down its bed,
While the others stood and watched in very fear.

He sent the flint stones flying, but the pony kept his feet,
He cleared the fallen timber in his stride,
And the man from Snowy River never shifted in his seat —
It was grand to see that mountain horseman ride.
Through the stringy barks and saplings, on the rough and broken ground,
Down the hillside at a racing pace he went;
And he never drew the bridle till he landed safe and sound,
At the bottom of that terrible descent.

He was right among the horses as they climbed the further hill,
And the watchers on the mountain standing mute,
Saw him ply the stockwhip fiercely, he was right among them still,
As he raced across the clearing in pursuit.
Then they lost him for a moment, where two mountain gullies met
In the ranges, but a final glimpse reveals
On a dim and distant hillside the wild horses racing yet,
With the man from Snowy River at their heels.

And he ran them single-handed till their sides were white with foam.
He followed like a bloodhound on their track,
Till they halted cowed and beaten, then he turned their heads for home,
And alone and unassisted brought them back.
But his hardy mountain pony he could scarcely raise a trot,
He was blood from hip to shoulder from the spur;
But his pluck was still undaunted, and his courage fiery hot,
For never yet was mountain horse a cur.

And down by Kosciusko, where the pine-clad ridges raise
Their torn and rugged battlements on high,
Where the air is clear as crystal, and the white stars fairly blaze
At midnight in the cold and frosty sky,
And where around the Overflow the reedbeds sweep and sway
To the breezes, and the rolling plains are wide,
The man from Snowy River is a household word to-day,
And the stockmen tell the story of his ride.

Kismit
and more on Clancy
and possibly my favorite Banjo Patterson poem .

Clancy of the overflow

I had written him a letter which I had, for want of better
Knowledge, sent to where I met him down the Lachlan, years ago,
He was shearing when I knew him, so I sent the letter to him,
Just on spec, addressed as follows, "Clancy, of The Overflow"

And an answer came directed in a writing unexpected,
(And I think the same was written with a thumb-nail dipped in tar)
Twas his shearing mate who wrote it, and verbatim I will quote it:
"Clancy's gone to Queensland droving, and we don't know where he are."

* * * * * * * * *

In my wild erratic fancy visions come to me of Clancy
Gone a-droving "down the Cooper" where the Western drovers go;
As the stock are slowly stringing, Clancy rides behind them singing,
For the drover's life has pleasures that the townsfolk never know.

And the bush hath friends to meet him, and their kindly voices greet him
In the murmur of the breezes and the river on its bars,
And he sees the vision splendid of the sunlit plains extended,
And at night the wond'rous glory of the everlasting stars.

* * * * * * * * *

I am sitting in my dingy little office, where a stingy
Ray of sunlight struggles feebly down between the houses tall,
And the foetid air and gritty of the dusty, dirty city
Through the open window floating, spreads its foulness over all

And in place of lowing cattle, I can hear the fiendish rattle
Of the tramways and the buses making hurry down the street,
And the language uninviting of the gutter children fighting,
Comes fitfully and faintly through the ceaseless tramp of feet.

And the hurrying people daunt me, and their pallid faces haunt me
As they shoulder one another in their rush and nervous haste,
With their eager eyes and greedy, and their stunted forms and weedy,
For townsfolk have no time to grow, they have no time to waste.

And I somehow rather fancy that I'd like to change with Clancy,
Like to take a turn at droving where the seasons come and go,
While he faced the round eternal of the cash-book and the journal --
But I doubt he'd suit the office, Clancy, of The Overflow.
j6p
Man O Man Kismit they were great. "The Man from Snowy River" read just like "The Charge of the Light Brigade", at least to me it did. Only much richer and more detailed. I cheered (mentally of coarse) when "he ran them single-handed till their sides were white with foam. He followed like a bloodhound on their track.
Till they halted cowed and beaten, then he turned their heads for home. And alone and unassisted brought them back." YES....
Sorry about the slight editing but that's the way I saw it. Do ya think Banjo would mind original.gif
What an amazing offspring it would be if Seabiscut and that little horse bred. Good golly miss molly, one can only dream rolleyes.gif

Starlyte
A poem my boyfriend wrote for me:

still-life

i could paint a picture,
could capture beauty with a brush
i can paint devotion for only you-
prick a finger, color blush
i can cloak the world in shadow
use jealousy to paint it black
then use the golden rays of sunlight
from your smile to beat it back
and for moments left uncertain
i'd catch you tears and paint it blue
then overlay with violet, passion
from nights alone with you
from high above where angels gaze,
steal their envy, shade it green
then cup my hands in moonlight
adding silver to my dream
our love is never still-life
never bridled, never caged;
only a feeling known eternal,
a masterpiece each passing age

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Starlyte
Here is another of mine:

How do I ask him to love me?
When these sad tears do fall
Depression does encompass me
A curse to me befall.

Shadows of a another time
When happiness did abound
He asks for a smile to brighten my face
Though I’m left with this curséd frown

How do such words spoken to me
Continue to distress me so
When words of sweetness and of love
Only make my sadness grow.

Pain is felt in this heavy heart
His love I know does show
He will always be right there
To guide my misplaced soul.
Rakshasas
I miss you

In Between the cycles of the seasons
In between the frozen heartlands of time
In between the pauses for breath
In between love `s petty crimes
I miss you…

In between the anger of the gods
In between the history timeline
In between the simple and the difficult
I miss you…

In between the conversation and the silence
In between the crumpled bed sheets
In between what I said today and yesterday
I miss you…

In between the criss- cross patterns of the lines of your hands
I am signposted
I am seen palming off emotional whirlwinds
In between the living, the naked and the dead
In between emptiness and a full dream
I miss you…..
Raziel
I write lots very often.

Heres one i jotted during an extremely boring DT class this morning...

Here we go,
There world is spinning.
When it stops,
Its just beginning.

Sun comes up,
We laugh and we cry.
Sun goes down,
And then we all die...

If i wrote them all then you would know that they all share the same pessimistic view...
theSOURCE
Here's another old song of mine. It's a little dark.

A Gothic Tale

I don't feel
The things that you feel
I can't grasp this emotion.

I must take flight
With the coming of night
For I don't have your devotion.

The thing that I crave
To stave off the grave
I must take from the living.

I'll steal your soul --
Consuming it whole
For my deeds, there is no forgiving.

Bridge:
I don't care
About what you've learned
And I don't care
For the people you've burned
I don't care
For your sanity
And I don't care
How much you hate me.

Chorus:
Let me touch you --
Let me drink your life
Let me hold you --
Let me hear you cry
Let me love you --
Let me end your strife
Let me hate you --
As I watch you die

Call out my name
And I'll ease your pain
You'll never again be alone.

Give up your will
As you feel a chill
My flesh is as cold as a stone.

You cannot hide
While I'm deep inside
Twisting your mind till it warps.

Feeling no pain
While going insane
Knowing you're loving a corpse.

Bridge
Chorus

Bridge
Chorus x 2
reese2
They are all really good... My favorite is MC's......... wub.gif I get what he is saying.. It sounds even better when he is singing it.. whistling2.gif


Reese
Mentalcase
Thank you Reese, I am in a better mood now! grin2.gif w00t.gif wub.gif


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Mentalcase
I wrote this song last Sunday...it is short but it rocks!!

Wishing Saving Light


It's all ready now, It's all riding in, I can't see the beggining of..too many sins

And everyone is doomed and I shall save my life
I've seen the simpleness in you

At's all getting loud, My thoughts are within, They are from the ending of..too many sins

And everyone is blessed with wishing saving light,
And the flavor of you is something new,

And every one is doomed and I shall save your life,
I feel the simpleness with you
Kismit
I would really like to hear these with the music Mental Case . Everytime I read one I hear Metallica in my head . Is there anywhere I can hear your music ?
Mentalcase
Trust me, they sound nothing like Metallica lol, more like a cross between soundgarden and nirvana sprinkled with a little bit of Jack Johnson. The only way I can show people right now is through MSN's voice chat feature. I have recordings, but the file sizes are huge and the quality isn't all that great.

Reese has actually heard a few of my songs, I would love to show everyone. I just need to go to the studio and master a recording, then convert it to MP3. The process is quite exhausting actually. original.gif
Kismit
QUOTE (Mentalcase @ Oct 21 2003, 12:12 PM)
I just need to go to the studio and master a recording, then convert it to MP3. The process is quite exhausting actually. original.gif

Really?? I though you made it all sound quite simple blink.gif


I'll be waiting patiently ..
gonzowalker
Thanks for the Man from Snowy River Kismit, I've seen the movie 1,001 times. Never heard the poem.

MC, your stuff is a little bit of alright thumbsup.gif

I'm finished mourning the loss of Johnny Cash, so I changed my avatar to Townes Van Zandt (deceased also). One of my favorite poet/singer/songwriters. He's like the guy hitch-hiking down the road that you slow down for, but just never stop. So I thought I'd put up one of his songs. Not his best but probably my favorite.


Marie

I stood in line and left my name
took about six hours or so
Well, the man just grinned like it was all a game
said they'd let me know
I put in my time till the Pocono line
shut down two years ago
I was stayin' at the mission till I met Marie
now I can't stay there no more

Fella cross town said he's lookin' for a man
to move some old cars around
maybe me and Marie could find a burned-out van
and do a little settlin' down
But I'm just dreamin' cause I got no ride
and the junkyards a pretty good ways
that job's about a half week old besides
It'd be gone now anyway

Unemployment said I got no more checks
and they showed me to the hall
my brother died in Georgia some time ago
and I got no one left to call
Summer wasn't bad below the bridge
a little short on food that's all
now I gotta get marie some kind of coat
we're headed down into fall


I used to play the mouth harp pretty good
hustled up a little dough
but I got drunk and I woke up rolled
a couple of months ago
they got my harp and they got my dollar
them low life so and so's
Harps cost money and I ain't got it
it's my own fault I suppose

The Pocono's down but the Chesapeak's runnin'
two freights everyday
If it was just me I'd be headed south
but Marie can't catch no train
She's got some pain and she thinks it's a baby
says we gotta wait and see
In my heart I know it's a little boy
hope he don't end up like me

Well, the man's still grinnin' says he lost my file
I gotta stand in line again
I want to kill him but I just say no
I've had enough of that line my friend
I head back to the bridge, it's gettin' kinda cold
I'm feelin' to low down to lie
guess I'll just tell Marie the truth
hope she don't break down and cry

Marie, she didn't wake up this mornin,
she didn't even try
She just rolled over and went to heaven
my little boy safe inside
I laid them in the sun where somebody'd find them
caught a chesapeak on the fly
Marie will know I'm headed south
so's to meet me by and by

Marie will know I'm headed south
so's to meet me by and by

Starlyte
Here is one of my favorite poems.

Alchemy

Because of the light of the moon,
Silver is found on the moor;
And because of the light of the sun,
There is gold on the walls of the poor.

Because of the light of the stars,
Planets are found in the stream;
And because of the light of your eyes
There is love in the depths of my dream.

by Francis Carlin
Starlyte
Another of mine.

UNTITLED

Her power, her beauty
His eyes do behold
From the softness of her lips
To the depths of her soul.

From the strength that protrudes
From her heart deep within
His hand strokes her hair
And the softness of her skin.

Her eyes,
How they tell the story of her past
Though the smile on her lips
Exudes true love at last.

The words that they form
Resound the sweetest intonation
As he pulls her closer
To acknowledge her affection.

As she whispers his name
He takes a deep breath
For the love that they share
Is all they have left.

As the night lingers on
They share their every aspiration
For nothing could come between them
Or their eternal dedication.
backward progress
Soft Porn........


in the blueblack of tonight
turn away to face the dark
tomb flowers bloomed
face the dark and turn away
breathe in a scent that will linger
stradling someone elses conscious
on the fabric of wet dreams
that once existed
in an air that falls apart
inside and all around me
was your soul inactive too ?
far away from me ?
The Kingdom of touch on flesh
i am dreaming in a new bed
my blades on his wrists rest
you'll hear the riddles of prayers calling
in the lurking liquid scenes
mind fixed with your flexible thought
the lost and found
will lay their love still
for smoke filled moans
don;t let me think
near over the edge
and lift my echoing heart
to a private paradise of dreams
in where i forget the craving
of your eternal touch
in an air that falls apart
when u can only be
all round and inside me
as the darkness lies now
and the same that i inhale
in an air that falls apart
between my legs inside my eyes
between my eyes
behind my eyes
down my throat
every otherwise
a tragicomedy of lust defined
a beam of light on a nameless back
a mobius strip of legs
i scorch the bruises to mark
my passage away from time
whitewashed all over again
stumbling on my way out
an undefined poison in a delicate prison
marked my moans stifled my thoughts
with new tales of random serienity
i came undone to exhale
in an air that falls apart
inside and all around me



Kryso
I must admit, I have really enjoyed reading through all your poems. I believe poetry is one of the hardest writing skills to perfect, and you have all done an amazing job. Why not get together and all pick your favourites and get a joint poetry book published?
Tioria
Poems huh?


The Reality of Love

There is a time when love is what it is……..
Love.

The one loves every inch of your body and takes in every intoxicating smell that you give off.
The one wishes on the same first star that you saw at night.

This special someone reflects on your life together and wants to greet you every morning.

This one person will fight with you just to make up and will help you through your problems no matter what the outcome might be.

They are angry when others disappoint you and let you down and sad when you have lost your way in life.

True love is commitment, understanding, caring when the other one doesn’t and laughing to get you to try and smile.

The one who truly loves you takes care of you in any way possible.

Once you have discovered this side of love it is hard to comprehend at first, but after awhile it slowly begins to meld into your skin.

The life of breathtaking kisses, extravagant gifts, and whirlwind trips together is but a fairytale dream.

Real love is the diamond that is beautiful and many sided; yet it can cut through the toughest of problems.

I have realized this a tad late and I hope to now get this opportunity straight.

Give me more time than you already have.
More patience than you can endure.
More understanding to help me deal with the world I live in.

Give me all you can and than you will see that I can wake up and live in reality.

Tioria
Another Time


Lying in his arms.
I am complete.
My heart beats at a steady pace.
I feel as if time has stopped still in order to allow us the chance to just be.
I don't know when or how, but there will be a time when we are one again.
The next time around will be played another way.
I will be his and he will be mine.
It's meant to be.
True love always finds a way.
backward progress
i hold within my hands someone else's strife...
mere shadows on my torso , are you?
a pen some sheets a near blunt knife
loose the light untie the shoe
some days life does feel unkempt
uncreased night , darkened bed
is your conscience washing itself
azazel
Hi gang, here's one about the cruel cold constitution of Ancient Sparta ..............

THE LYCURGEAN CRADLE

Deformed infants wedged in a barren crag,
silent abjects to rigorous reform.
Abandoned they lay, wrapped in black linen,
branded as non-prospering seed!

The lucky ones that evade punishment,
soak their tunics for the sake of Sparta.

Ejected from a brazen mould,
their individuality is erased.
Absorbed by a military sponge,
their hardness cannot be swayed.

Instead of toys and harmony,
they latch onto their spears with pride.
Castrated from all luxury,
it is in Lycurgus they abide.

Impartial mothers show no heart,
their tears ducts have never flowed.
"Come back with your shield or on it!" They cry,
for disgrace does not dwell in Sparta.

Encamped in rugged wilderness,
their discipline digests the cold.
Flutes, drums and ferocious war cries echo......
diminishing the sound of their marching leather soles.

Olive groves lament the past,
only splinters of the cradle remain....
No more cauldrons to brew their black broth.
only pebbles to guide their sacred stream.

28/07/95
kreestar
You are all very talented. I feel meek putting my lousy writing up but I will anyways.

Please don't go,
I need you here with me.
Every breathe I take without you
is a lost breathe of air.
I need you,
you should know.
That you are my last chance.
Without you there is Loneliness,
and it's dark tonight.
Without you I fall,
I am nothing.

theSOURCE
Just an old poem of mine.


I met a girl at a party
About a couple of weeks ago
I can't stop thinking about her
And I think that I should let her know

Sure, we've hooked up and had our fun
Even once on the hallway floor
And though it's not hard living by myself
I think I need something more

I know we're not a couple
But I'll tell her just how I feel
That way she can decide for herself
When she knows I'm being real

I told her where to meet me
Having decided this was the day
I walked up to where she waited
Rehearsing what I'd planned to say

She smiled at me, and then she asked -
So you want to tell me something new?
I said - I just wanted to let you know
Exactly how I feel about you

She quickly lost her smile
Then she slowly shook her head
I couldn't understand why
She looked so shocked with what I'd said

We both stood there in silence
Then I finally heard her sigh
She took my hand in hers
And she looked me in the eye

She said - Some times I let my feelings show
But most times they're too hard to see
It's easier to act like I can't feel
Than to show you what's inside of me

Now if I were just a little more sure
Then I'd tell you that you're more than a friend
But that would mean I'd have to be myself
And I don't know where or how to begin

So I'll have to say I'm sorry for now
Maybe things will be different someday
She kissed me on the cheek and winked at me
Then she turned and slowly walked away

I stood and watched, but she never looked back
And my hopes all began to unwind
I wanted to follow and call out her name
But I knew I couldn't change her mind

When she was gone, I turned away
There's no reason to hang around here
I walked into the nearest pub
And thought I'd drown myself in beer

As I sat there feeling sorry for myself
A hot chick giving me a smile
She took me home with her that night
And made me feel good for a while

So now I'm seeing someone new
And this time she's more than a friend
I hope I don't go and screw it up
"Cause I hate to start over again
moe eubleck
Haiku #1

I am kcelbue eom
Actually thats backwards
I am Moe Eubleck

Moe has five fingers.......
To hell with five seven five!
Moe has a headache
Allie
Very Good SOURCE!!!
I really like your poem..... Like I said before you are very talented indeed!!!! thumbsup.gif
moe eubleck
Moes mall trip Haiku:

such propaganda
Yes, god bless america
damn bumperstickers.

mind the puddle dear
tip-toe tip-toe on slick tiles
nasty men's restroom

sneering ocelot
the mirror mocks my image
We dont look this way

Daddy, he hit me!
just try to ignore him dear
Daddy she hit me!

fuzzy headed hug
dark tresses tickle my chin
ow! Dont bite me there!

Dont mind the stroller
ignore the father facade
Whats your phone number?

nothing romantic
the playground slide will suffice
Daddy! She hit me!
moe eubleck
Moes freestyle #1 (*note: if they turn out rude, they are not aimed at anyone in particular)

Yo yo yo
yo ryhmes are so old school and trite look
they sound like you stole it from a Dr. seuss book

you aint no Slim Shady
Vanilla Ice maybe
Except for your five year old vocabulary
so heres a dictionary
now turn to page eighty
can you spell the word "lady" ?
what happened to just crazy?
feeling a bit hazy
cuz when I woke up
they were all watchin 'maisy'

genetically inbred
medically brain dead
oh what have I said?
Drink some coffee instead
thats all Moe can get off the top of his head.

*this freestyle rap crap is hard
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