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They say a world war can be fought with sticks and stones, what I say is war can only be fought by skull and bones. Death is no closer to life than when hands hold what gives birth, when sticks and stones are tiresome weapons let go of the earth. Ever punishing is the nature humane saner - the fittest survivor humanity. Never pushing or pulling is the beastial more refraining than the weakest insanity. I had once known a time I realized the most of in between, never to forget fear. I also once knew nearly dying from it, I missed what meant to see or hear. Sadness is the weakest gift besides anger given not taken, depression when no one is curious. Ive only begun to understand worldly fears within the impression, only I am furious.


-P~Flack
sibyll
this really isnt a poem, but its something ive been working on.

Life is:

life is death
to live is to die
between life and death
there is a surprise
something we couldnt have asked for
yet something we wanted
happiness, sorrow, maddening terror
things that mean Life itself
defining and unerving
you cannot choose which emotion to feel
and when to feel it
because that would be defying life.
we must experience all the pain
all the happiness, deaths of friends
and births of children all very meaning full
the kiss of your first love
the heartbreak of a first break up
to truly be happy you must look at all the pain in your life
and understand that it made you who you are
and that is Life

~kristen Baughman~
~TheArtOfContact~
^That........is not that far off by what I mean...keep working on it. thumbsup.gif
Sthenno
PF, there's some great images there and I love the stream of consiousness style. I can't help thinking that you might have a few too many ideas in such a short poem, though. Maybe try and stick to each notion for a few more lines and make it a longer poem? Just a thought...
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