During the last 18 days i was devastated, and last night, with just a click of a mouse i will be in the news and a company will go down for sure. But i hold on and have a smoke outside and looked on the sky " give me a sign if i am gonna do it" and a lightning strike. I told God you want me to do it ? while looking for another sign i heard my 5 year old boy on my computer. I ran as fast as i can, oh ! God ! he might push the button but my boy wasn't sitting there. Then i closed the window of a nuclear button. I'm not gonna do it. I am not gonna fight once more ...in a war that i know...i could never win...and no one will.

Might be a blockbuster, its true story and still happening.
I want to say more but someone might steal my story.
It has high moral values. I exchanged my family and my house to stand on my feet and no one had ever done it, because i know...nothing is indispensable.

To get a story published you usually have to have the whole thing written. It's also a good idea for a first book to employ a manuscript checking service to look at it before you send it off to a publisher, as they're pretty ruthless. There are some more professional sites where you can get feedback on work without running the risk of copyright theft, but I'm afraid I don't have any links to hand. A quick google should bring some up though.

Thanks for the info Sthenno.
In a few weeks time i decided to go back on my work.
I still have a chance of getting more than a million dollar if i change my mind.
But i'm a compassionate person even i am badly hurt.
It's a million dollar for sure but...not all people think about money.