Oh where art thou, my Love?
Art thou lost in the hills above or in the valleys below.

Each day and night I seek thee as I roam the countryside
Asking here and there, have you seen my love?

But Alas, you are nowhere in sight
and it is this which causes fright
My fruitless plight in the night

Oh love where art thou?
I have wandered to and fro
My love has never dwindled though
My heart is full of woe

I look out my cottage window each day and see the wind blow
Leaves of green, orange and yellow, and soon we'll have snow

I see leaves blow high up in the sky
I sigh and then I cry
for fear I might die
when morning is nigh
my search gone awry

Come one and come all and hear my plea
Come quick, my love, and set my heart free.

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~ Isis

I used to belong to a poetry chatroom, and another member and I used to do a dialog of improvisational poetry(like the poem I just posted.) It was a lot of fun when we did the improvisational poetry, and we actually had quite an audience.

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~ Isis

Hi Exterminator:

What do you think of my poem? :-)

~ Isis

That was quite an awesome poem! The rhyming is particularly great. I saw your other poems like 'Just an old man' and 'December' and they were incredible too. Well as the matter of fact, rhyming words are perfect in every poem and in almost every single line. 'Just an old man' really touched my heart. Though I am not a good judge but from me your talent is worthy to get A++ !!

Thank you so much, Exterminator. That was very sweet of you. Gee, I think I'm gonna cry now, and I mean that.

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~ Isis

Writing poems is really an innate treasure which cannot be gained. Losing that treasure is really an awful thing to do because it is an inborn talent, you cannot regain it once you have lost it. And becoming a master of it is really considered a very challenging task since it shows that you have a very highly developed imagination and skill. I like the way you extract heart touching truths and thoughts from a simple picture or day-to-day things. The ability of a poet is determined by the affect on people from his or her poems, and if the poem really stirs the emotions of the people then the person is considered a great poet.

I agree with Exterminator, Isis, A++.

I especially enjoy the whole beauty in agony aspect of it, the sadness in love. It reminds me somewhat of Poe, who is my absolute favorite.

Great job. I'm gonna read all of your stuff.

Oh Wow .. that is an awesome poem Isis .. Well Done!!!

Thank you, Glassvampire; I'm glad you like it.

Well, if mine is A++, then your work is A++++.

~ Isis2200

Thank you, Isis

You're too cool and way too kind.

As are you, Sir Glassvampire.

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~ Isis2200

Beautifully done Isis, a moving poem. It captures the spirit of the hopeful romantic.

Thanks, Nativechick. :-) and.....a special request........> "Pink basketball! Pink basketball! Pink basketball!"

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~ Isis2200

Thank you, Bearly. :-) The next poem I submit will be one of a hopeless romantic........without hope.

~ Isis2200

It seems i've had that feeling most of my life, but there really is always hope, i hope