Happy New Year


by Isis2200

To All I say have a "Happy New Year"
For our future let us not Fear; rather,
Stand up and cheer, my dear.

Outside as they get all the fireworks in gear
We'll peer out the window and then we will hear
Fireworks and guns going off in our ears.

This old year passes, and another is near
I feel on my face the slight drop of a tear.
Although some may jeer and others may cheer,
I say to you all have a Happy New Year.

WOW lol that was really good, though I still fear the new year

In the depth's of winter
another year is born
that brings with it
the promise of new beginnings
and friendship.

Happy New Year, Isis.

Happy New Year to you too, my friend Leonardo!

Well, in the poem I was going to say "Pass me a beer, my dear" because it rhymes. Lol But I don't drink so.....

~ Isis

That's a very nice poem, isis. I've said goodbye to last year already and ready for the new one. Big plans, have I!

Don't fear, Exeller, and don't worry. Remember about the power of positive thinking.

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~ Isis

Thank you, Melly. I'm glad you liked it, and I'm glad you're able to put the year behind you and look forward to a new year. Big plans??? I'm curious what you have planned.

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~ Isis

Happy New Year Isis. I hope it is a great one for you. I am excited about this year, should be rocking.

I liked the poem, however, I think it would make your poems slightly better if you didn't rhyme everything same in the stanza the same, or as in this poem all lines the same (ear). Perhaps alternate lines, such as

Line a ending: dear
Line b ending: too
Line c ending: beer
Line d ending: you


Just something to think about, don't take my suggestion too negatively

Bearly, you must realize that we all have our own style of poetry. For me to go to one of your stories, posts, or poetry and say "It would make the post better if you did this or that", I think that would be inappropriate and unprofessional. If I felt a need to criticize your work, I'd do it in a PM(which I wouldn't do anyway). I mean we're not talking about UFO's, aliens or evolution here. It's just poetry. Perhaps you may want to refrain from criticizing other people's artistic work in the forum. :-)

I hope you don't take my suggestion too negatively. :-)

~ Isis

Sorry Isis, my bad.

Forgive me?

Sure, I will forgive you.

~ Isis

Cool, have a great new year

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hello everyone, im new here.. just wanted to wish everyone a happy new year

WELCOME~

Welcome and Happy New Year, Dhampir.

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~ Isis

thank u sweety

Sorry Im Late....

Happy New Years To You 2 !!!

Nice work I loved it... Round of applause, your poems are gracious,reflecting,beautiful and at the right time.

Groovy poem ..

Happy New Year Isis ... Hope you had a wonderful time ringing in the New Year ..

Thank you very much, Sir Kaknelson. I always add "Sir" to your name because you are so gallant.

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~ Isis

Thanks for that.

I try to, I guess I am quite spirited.



Your not so bad yourself Empress...

Thank you, Nativechick; and yes, I did have a wonderful time ringing in the New Year.
Oh no, you changed your avatar. I really liked that pink basketball you had. Too bad you don't live closer. We could shoot some hoops. Remind me next time you're in town.

~ Isis

Ah yes .. I love Basketball ..

Good to hear that you enjoyed your NYs .. Here's to a Happy & Prosperous year .. *cheers*