Aching

You can't be put in your place, when you've got no place to go,
But we always find our places, so lets try to take this slow.
My blood was drawn,
The day was long,
But I'd seen the misery in your eyes.
As the light faded,
My mind debated,
The reasons that you cry.
You don't see your the reason my heart beats,
Here I wanna to ask you if this is something we can keep.
I'd never wanted anyone but you beside me now,
But if this means you don't want me, does it mean I should step down.
I never wanted to be the reason that you cry,
Now your the reason that I bleed.
It seems to me not that long ago, you said I was all you'd ever need.
What happened to that happy girl I would kiss all night long
Was it life, was it me, where did this thing wrong.
What do you need me for after the anger that I loosed
And when you say you wont tell me, it just makes me feel so used.
I've never stopped loving you, don't even think I can,
But I have never drawn your blood or even raised my hand.
Tell me what am I suppose to do, my eyes are filled with tears,
And I can't seem to bring myself to throw away the years.
Remembering a different time, though you say it was never real,
But I'm sorry, you can't tell me the way I feel.
B Mc

Leviathan, that's such a heartfelt poem. I could really feel the pain in that poem.....the sadness over something that could've been.....something that could've lasted.

If this poem was written from personal experience, I'm so sorry you had to experience that.

Nicely written.

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~ Isis

I totally agree.
My heart feels for you - either that you experiences something like that or just thinking about it.
Makes me wanna give you a hug

Personal experience, a recent experience actually. The poem is more litteral than you might think, and so is the hurt. The whole issue is still floating in the air now

Well, I hope there will be a resolution soon; either that, or I hope someone else nice comes along.

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~ Isis

As do I

Nicely written and well expressed..hope all works out well for you.

Very deep and heart felt.

Good poem.


And good luck with the situation.

Im glad you can feel it, thats sort of what I was going for. Its easier to deal with things once they're out of my head