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Moro
Hey everyone, I just thought that i would make a thread on my thoughts! You may add your own comments to them as well!
And feel free to post your own thoughts!

So anyway i will start out with a poem that i wrote back in 1998!

QUOTE
It's Coming
His dominion shall also reign
from one sea to the other, and from
the flood unto the world's end they that
dwell in the darkness shall kneel before
Him, his enemies shall feel the eternal
burn that they have led themselves to.
Listen to the words of the chosen one.
There is a sleek, swift segment of my soul
that whips against the waters of renewal,
you to have such a portion of yourself divide
it in a thousand pieces, then shall we all be
free. There is a way to escape the pains and
agony of life in my world of glory that drives
a man through madness into joy; to have
a portion of yourself divide it in a thousand
pieces the shall we all be free.
There is locked door deep inside my heart, a dam
against bewilderment and fear, you to have a portion
of yourself divide it in a thousand pieces, then shall
we all be free. So hope and pray you're ready for the end
of time sure to come, words of wisdom can only take you
so far. Listen to your heart and faith will take you all the way.

Thomas E. Rachel

Copyright ©1998 Thomas E. Rachel

My thoughts on my poem is it is nice but, I was still confused back then, I was still reading the bible!
I have changed alot through the years since then!

Any thoughts on my poem?

~Moro

_Nyx_
QUOTE
There is locked door deep inside my heart, a dam
against bewilderment and fear,


I love that part yes.gif

It's a very good poem original.gif
nativechick1989
Awesome .. thumbsup.gif

"Listen to your heart ...." yes.gif
glassvampire
I think it's great! Very, very heavy

Have you any more?
Saint
It's got a frightening, apocalyptic feel to it. I think it's very good. An end of times feel, dark, heavy, scary

Love this:

There is locked door deep inside my heart, a dam
against bewilderment and fear, you to have a portion
of yourself divide it in a thousand pieces, then shall
we all be free.
Moro
Thanks everyone, I am actually in the process of writing a few more,
I will put them on here when i'm done writing them!
Moro
Here is another short poem i just thought up the other day!

Tell me what you think!

As i grasp another dark night
a faint shadow appears slowly from light
staring as if it were reading my thoughts tonight
closer,and closer, it gets,
I now feel my fists begin to clinch
As i realize i was only looking in a,
mirror of my lonely pit...


~Moro
glassvampire
You have some serious talent, man. thumbsup.gif
when.i.am.queen.
QUOTE(Moro Bumbleroot @ Jan 30 2007, 01:10 PM) [snapback]1521651[/snapback]
As i realize i was only looking in a,
mirror of my lonely pit...

~Moro


These lines are so beautiful, they are going to be in my mind all night.
You have an amazing talent there.
Saint
agreed Moro!! You are a good poet, with an ability to conjure up astounding pictures!!
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