And feel free to post your own thoughts!
So anyway i will start out with a poem that i wrote back in 1998!
QUOTE
It's Coming
His dominion shall also reign
from one sea to the other, and from
the flood unto the world's end they that
dwell in the darkness shall kneel before
Him, his enemies shall feel the eternal
burn that they have led themselves to.
Listen to the words of the chosen one.
There is a sleek, swift segment of my soul
that whips against the waters of renewal,
you to have such a portion of yourself divide
it in a thousand pieces, then shall we all be
free. There is a way to escape the pains and
agony of life in my world of glory that drives
a man through madness into joy; to have
a portion of yourself divide it in a thousand
pieces the shall we all be free.
There is locked door deep inside my heart, a dam
against bewilderment and fear, you to have a portion
of yourself divide it in a thousand pieces, then shall
we all be free. So hope and pray you're ready for the end
of time sure to come, words of wisdom can only take you
so far. Listen to your heart and faith will take you all the way.
Thomas E. Rachel
Copyright ©1998 Thomas E. Rachel
His dominion shall also reign
from one sea to the other, and from
the flood unto the world's end they that
dwell in the darkness shall kneel before
Him, his enemies shall feel the eternal
burn that they have led themselves to.
Listen to the words of the chosen one.
There is a sleek, swift segment of my soul
that whips against the waters of renewal,
you to have such a portion of yourself divide
it in a thousand pieces, then shall we all be
free. There is a way to escape the pains and
agony of life in my world of glory that drives
a man through madness into joy; to have
a portion of yourself divide it in a thousand
pieces the shall we all be free.
There is locked door deep inside my heart, a dam
against bewilderment and fear, you to have a portion
of yourself divide it in a thousand pieces, then shall
we all be free. So hope and pray you're ready for the end
of time sure to come, words of wisdom can only take you
so far. Listen to your heart and faith will take you all the way.
Thomas E. Rachel
Copyright ©1998 Thomas E. Rachel
My thoughts on my poem is it is nice but, I was still confused back then, I was still reading the bible!
I have changed alot through the years since then!
Any thoughts on my poem?
~Moro