The Mind of Suicide

Memories once lost now come up to your mind again
and you find no comfort in the words of family or friend
The cemetary seems inviting and the razor feels like biting
through the flesh and deep, so deep, into the vein,
the silence of the graves seem like heaven to your ears
and the rancid petals left upon the ground,
give you memories of those you lost and wish to see again
you look for them but they cannot be found,
their spirits are among you overshadowing your brain
calling to you, come, come on out and play,
but to them you cannot speak, you feel so damn tired and weak
it needs to end somebody help me stop this pain
theres but one thing you can do
under light of the full moon
the blade it pierces and it tears into the bone
your soul is now set free
and you feel now so much glee
that as you fall all you can think of is release



Insanity

Darkness all around comforts me into a slumber
while unseen noises come, from and unknown number
the creatures all about me are laughing, chirping, and although
I try to hide my feelings I am pretty sure they show
the cries of anguish, pain, they haunt me
they wont leave my mind, constant buzzing, like a bee
I know now why i was locked in this cell
So that i dont share my curse, of making life a living Hell
can you see me? Trapped behind this thick glass wall
I see you all the time, I see you all
I see the perfect lives you live and take as nothing, though,
I believe if we switched places then you'd surely know
how much a gift tis to be normal, to be free
insanity has overtaken, slowly, horribly, killing me.


So what do you think of them?

42 views and no comments? come on guys i want some feedback on these.

It's dark, that's for sure. It shows that you have lots of pain and you express yourself that way through your words. Good stuff.

MC

It's pretty good.....It reminds me of the poetry that you would hear in a club that has the abstract readings.....I think that they would be a great hit. Keep up the good work.....

I loved them, really good work. The metaphors you used and the alliterations make the whole poem very intense. Beauty is also found in Darkness