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Themis
Love's Way

I felt that fear again today
That my love may go astray
That if I love, I’ll be betrayed
That again I’ll lose my way
But then I sat and thought it through
What is the worst that it can do?
One day you may break my heart
But does it mean that we must part?
What does true love mean to me
It means you set your lover free
If they return, come back to you
Then you know your love is true
So my friend, just take that chance
Trust in love and true romance
Don’t be afraid of what you lose
Know that if it’s right they will choose

You
glassvampire
Very very cool!

So fluid, it's like it just comes natural for you.

Does it feel that way when you write?
Themis
I wrote that one in about 10 minutes... I've gone from blank despair to being really happy today laugh.gif

I'm not usually subject to mood swings like that... must be PMT w00t.gif
She-ra
Loved it hun. So beautiful and true. Cuts to the core, eh? Go on girl...let's hear some more!! xo, Jody
Themis
Thank you Jody.. that really does mean a lot to me... like you.. posting your innermost self is pretty darn scary original.gif
She-ra
It is...let's just do it together!! Strength in numbers and all that...lol...deal? original.gif
Themis
I'm there with you hon thumbup.gif
She-ra
ok hun!!!! grin2.gif LET'S LIMIT TO ONE PER DAY THO...COOL? (Oops) cap lock...
Themis
ROFLMAO

I feel in you a kindred spirit Jody wink2.gif
She-ra
Indeed...wink2.gif

xoxo
Inner Space
Themis...that was awesome. original.gif
Themis
Thank you InnerSpace blush.gif
Wallfly
Oh, what shall you do?
What shall you do, when
you find your love has betrayed you?

Comes back to your sin
of loving within
again, and again and again

You have set her free
She falls to her knees
reluctantly, needing to flee

You've given her wings
she cries and she sings
refusing the sky for a tree

....it's ironic how much our recent entries have paralleled. Albeit, a bit brighter of vision with yours!

Thank you.
Themis
Wow.. that poem is really good Wallfly.. I love it...
When did you write it? (would be very ironic if we wrote them at the same time grin2.gif )
when.i.am.queen.
That is a very pretty poem, Themis.

No wait.
When rereading it, it became...

exquisite.

Its beautiful

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Themis
Thank you When.I.am.Queen blush.gif
Wallfly
QUOTE(Themis @ Jul 2 2007, 10:57 PM) *
Wow.. that poem is really good Wallfly.. I love it...
When did you write it? (would be very ironic if we wrote them at the same time grin2.gif )


Yes, it would! But I wrote it in response to YOUR poem. My recent blog entry however, dealt with the same subject initially, but from the other side. When one tries to let go, but the other refuses to do the same. Then ultimately, the eventual succumbing of the lover to retain the love. Its hard enough to force it once, but how many times does it take before one stops forcing, and accepts it back?

Wonderful words of yours btw.
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