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Sadonis
There is just one question
to ask.
What is it that you see
as the sifting sands roar past?

Is it life when you can claim
That a blind man
Sees color more truly
Than yourself?

Sight has no baring
For mind.
And while this compass may not
point North--the charts read sideways.

And while this dazed denizen
May find beauty in the blue color
of the sky--What is it that makes him
Shy?

For all the moments when
Indifference stands potent
For inebriated
words.

The flowers will spring
One by one. In all
The summer's seasons and surprises.
A man looks up.

To the sky--perhaps
But one can see that hope
Is found in hoping
He sees the rain.

Endeavor the find
That a penny--a two sided
coin--acts as a stimuli
to the mind.

For one side is
Simple. While the other side
Bares what sight lets you
see.

The blind man, however, does not
see it. Yet the rain that
falls can still be
heard.





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Hope you liked it. You may need to read it more than once to get it original.gif

Ashiene
bare is not the correct word. bear is.
Sadonis
QUOTE(Ashiene @ Jul 2 2007, 12:55 PM) *
bare is not the correct word. bear is.



Umm...I would usually say that it was 7 in the morning(which it was) I did this in 10 minutes(which I did) and that I'm sorry and will correct it, however; I will not say that to excuse it.


Please use a dictionary before you suggest that of me.


And I understand bearing and baring are different words with different meanings. Perhaps my intellect on the matter should serve as a justifiable pointer as to why I used it.
Inner Space
QUOTE(Ashiene @ Jul 2 2007, 08:55 AM) *
bare is not the correct word. bear is.



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Inner Space
Wow Sadonis, it only took you 10 minutes? Very nice. original.gif
She-ra
I LOVE IT. Thank you for sharing.

Sorry someone couldn't have PM'ed you with that comment rather than posting it in this thread.

I would assume that didn't make you feel too good. Sorry hun. Keep it up. I reallllllllllllly Liked it!!

Take care, Jody
Themis
I really liked that one too Sadonis...

especially the use of 'bares' - It was very clever thumbsup.gif
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