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cor_raven

upon the road

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Upon the Road

Upon the road

far, long and wide

stretches on

as one stride

Past the fields

of wheat and corn

past the cattle

of long horn

Across rivers

under sky

over hills

where eagles fly

Through old forests

trees of green

through bright valleys

fair to be seen

It follows streams

to the sea

for this road

goes on to see

Upon the road

far, long and wide

stretches on

as one stride

tell me waht you think

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cor_raven that's lovely!

I particularly like:

Through old forests

trees of green

through bright valleys

fair to be seen

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very good bounce.gifclap.gif encore tongue.gifgrin2.gif

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Good job, it's got a very nice flow to it!!! thumbsup.gif

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Nice poem.. thumbsup.gif .It rhymes and flows very well. Good job!

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