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AdealJustice

[Merged] Concious Hip Hop

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Hey! I have been writing for a while but now i am starting to make some music, i am a beginner still but practice a lot everyday. check out my channel, my lyrics are meant to get people thinking, some people might not agree with some topics but kep an open mind and constructive critism will be helpful!!, thanks http://www.youtube.com/user/Adealist/videos

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Hi everyone!, i write lyrics for hip hop / poetry and have been doing so far almost 2 years now. I am starting to record hip hop aswell but for now i will post my lyrics which can also be found on the UM blog and links are in my signature.

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I havent named my lyrics yet but these are the verse ones of many to come. comments would help me! thnx

i witness my life move through new experiences

meeting many people, many different appearances

every moment flashing by, then i realize im laying in my death bed

my heads on a pillow but my mind doesn't rest, i reassure myself,

"i tried my best", trying to top the test, wasted my life trying to impress

but now i can't stress enough, live your life according to your wishes

no one is your master and the quicker we accept this we can progress

nowa days we are quickily regressing, the rich are oppressing

stop stressing , start professing your thoughts,

remember what people want, in the future

they’ll be saying truth n equality, reasons they fought

Names Adeal, i spit for real ain't tryna conceal as i reveal

lyrics are surreal forever, the name used to be a source of jokes

but i destroyed the hoax , now folks listen to my vision

opening minds from the prison, ain't tryna to be a politician

but my mission is to start a revolution, end the pollution

destruction of our planet, fix our society

snatch it outa the devils sole proprietary, Jesus aint the saviour

its our whole humanity, im only a messenger, so don't come crying to me

i see the potentiality in humanity, every individual with the same capacity

although we use it differently, we all sound gifted to me

as long as we do what we enjoy without trying to destroy

were being played like puppets and toys, the real hand is invisible

the symbol is the one eye, banking, government n media

are pieces of the same pie, grasp the moment it time flies by

Used to live life watching it go by

Never used take part but I realized why

So now I try, but Tryna take take my piece of the pie

Without takin another's, and cause I recognize were all brothers

I spit about the struggle, and bombs exploding people covered in rubble

This is my lyrical rebuttal, to the elites, while they planning

Hurdles infront of our path, but my words are the gas,

Like the **** they invented and used in the camps

Killing people every second elapsed, honesty harassed

But I ain't quitting till their structure has collapsed

So relax, still, I read and understand, ignore the disinformation

open your eyes to the realization, **** false self glorification

As my lyrics are part of the restoration, the true explanation

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Believe me, it's great. 'Conscious' for sure.

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thank you, these are unrefined. Means a lot

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thank you, these are unrefined. Means a lot

Nice work. I like what you are doing, keep it up.

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Nice work. I like what you are doing, keep it up.

thank you , :)

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imagine the abyss , lyrically the mainstream is ****

then I reminisce, a few individuals who spit the poetic dialect,

ahead of the time like biotech,

against this corruption im insurrect

leavin you perplexed as to how im so adamant, a hip hop activist

exposing hypocritical philanthropists that are corruptin the cabinet,

political puppets hidin what the problem is

In this world I'm livin in, the place I be spittin in

My lyrics are riveting, while most be spittin primitive

My thoughts are limitless, no one can limit this

Ill show you what your limit is, I'm the original

You just the derritive , nowdays faker actin

Like lyrcists need their permission slip , Picture this ,

Talkin about swag is ridiculous, hypocrites

while the poor starvin , we livin materialist

Democratic imperialists livin in deliriousness

so i write the truth so we can experience it

cause the news is meant to confuse your views

humans are merely puppets, all of us meant to be use

here is another verse by me, i will update the post. lemme know what you think

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imagine the abyss , lyrically the mainstream is ****

then I reminisce, a few individuals who spit the poetic dialect,

ahead of the time like biotech,

against this corruption im insurrect

leavin you perplexed as to how im so adamant, a hip hop activist

exposing hypocritical philanthropists that are corruptin the cabinet,

political puppets hidin what the problem is

In this world I'm livin in, the place I be spittin in

My lyrics are riveting, while most be spittin primitive

My thoughts are limitless, no one can limit this

Ill show you what your limit is, I'm the original

You just the derritive , nowdays faker actin

Like lyrcists need their permission slip , Picture this ,

Talkin about swag is ridiculous, hypocrites

while the poor starvin , we livin materialist

Democratic imperialists livin in deliriousness

so i write the truth so we can experience it

cause the news is meant to confuse your views

humans are merely puppets, all of us meant to be use

here is another verse by me, i will update the post. lemme know what you think

bump

false miracles distractin us, i call it miraculous

they say it was immaculate, scientifically inaccurate

spreadin ignorance, superstition, corrupting the true rendition

just some quick thoughts

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to think there isn't a prison of inhibition

detrimental societal relations, negative vibrations

i dont need to spell it out in abbreviation , so i use lyrical imagination

cause i don't need recognition to prove my political position

ill take the peoples position, in every rendition, image or history

it will never remain a mystery as to what happened

or will happen, avoidin the distractions, discretely extractin

the important information, no hesitation for the truth exposition

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its my time to spit metaphors , as if my musics opening the doors

while you closing the gates, singing pretty tunes, tryna wheel em all in

but theres an ending to everything, fact is there is little comprehending anything

these days most get paid to distract your brains, its seems as if most have given in

feel yourself privileged to hear me spit, light shining bright in the darkness,

discover my word's as the source of it, every day im living

the world im exploring it, but im distraught to see others destroying it

i don't give a **** if your title is highness, i'd never sell out, i'd decline it

cause they own they industry, they define it, i spit reality, forever defying

when the days comes for judgement, what'll you say , on whom were you relying?

no need for fake swagger, they the industries prostitutes ,

so stay away from the blue pill, to learn what really constitutes

your existence, you are limited by their permissions,

but no matter what happens, ill find the answer like division

through my vision, reading inscriptions so yall can listen in

blind, deaf and dumb actin as if the elites are permissive

hunger can be ended would they allow to permit it

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Pretty nice. Keep'em coming. :)

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Pretty nice. Keep'em coming. :)

thank -you !

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Posted (edited)

wrote this last night, tributed to Nas ...

lyrcally im untouchable, can't front me im unfrontable

call me trouble cause i spit the truth, the forbidden fruit

shrewd but im real cause i know what yall feel

but you might not say it, delay it but i spray it

like a mac 11, **** reverends, i spit benevolent

a wide vocabulary, probably, tough to come by,

tried enough, i spit reality, cause vanity ain't worth it

so i curse it, **** actin thug, i pull the plug, i call it repulsive

money, i could give a **** i give a shrug * , record labels

blood sucking shrubs, no happy ending like rub and tugs

i spit like Plato, Aristotle, any battle, any hastle

i break the shackles, every moment, fiends hindin like jackals

lets be practical, intellectuals rarely exist, but i persist

swear, i insist, this insant , every existence, poetic

genius, sayin they hate me cause im nuclear, Iranian

Surroundin them, like a saracen attack, destructive

Like the war in Iraq, back track to see where the fund are at

i dunk but yall shoot three pointers like Shaq

yet you have the audacity to ask what i lack

Edited by seller2006

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oh nice!

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thank yu:), feed back appreciated, at least you take the time to! , means a lot

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Lyrcally im untouchable, can't front me im unfrontable

call me trouble cause i spit the truth, the forbidden fruit

shrewd but im real cause i know what yall feel

but you might not say it, delay it but i spray it

like a mac 11, **** reverends, i spit benevolent

a wide vocabulary, probably, tough to come by,

tried enough, i spit reality, cause vanity ain't worth it

so i curse it, **** actin thug, i pull the plug, i call it repulsive

money, i could give a **** i give a shrug **** giving a **** , record labels

blood sucking shrubs, no happy ending like rub and tugs

i spit like Plato, Aristotle, any battle, any hastle

i break the shackles, every moment, fiends hindin like jackals

lets be practical, intellectuals rarely exist, but i persist

swear, i insist, this insant , every existence, poetic

genius, sayin they hate me cause im nuclear, Iranian

Surroundin them, like a saracen attack, destructive

Like the war in Iraq, back track to see where the fund are at

i dunk but yall shoot three pointers like Shaq

yet you have the audacity to ask what i lack

‎"they don't know who we be", we try to see

the inherent hypocrisy, psychology hurtin me

but i created a barrier, i call it my mind, one of a kind

you'll learn in due time, why im always in my lyrical prime

cause if genocide is the answer, than ill never stay in line

one can never justify violent crimes, i know my end

its the same as yours, but i picked my path,

can you choose yours, the world meant to be explored

many people made to endure, the worst of the worst

the type of things, make you wish you were in a hearse

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Saw in my dream I was talking to Yeshua,

he was eatin reeces pieces then he asked me

sarcastically, " Jesus" when will this corruption leave us.

sayin look at this planet, even the religious are Heathen

most don't understand the purpose of their breathin

the politicians , simply actors who were paid rehearse

like a televangelist preaching about the church,

the truth is never heard, but im always alert

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Saw in my dream I was talking to Yeshua,

he was eatin reeces pieces then he asked me

sarcastically, " Jesus" when will this corruption leave us.

sayin look at this planet, even the religious are Heathen

most don't understand the purpose of their breathin

the politicians , simply actors who were paid rehearse

like a televangelist preaching about the church,

the truth is never heard, but im always alert

I like that, it's really good. :tu:

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I like that, it's really good. :tu:

thank - you!

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these are some of the tracks i will be recording to very soon :)

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jW2x20d5rUU

just made this, let me know what you think

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I feel your lyrics and the direction you are trying to go. I have some constructive criticism if you don't mind. You need to find beats that go with your lyrics a little better. You're not really riding the beat too well. Get what I am trying to say? It's like the words don't mesh with beats.

That's my brother....see how his lyrics flow right along with the music? I think you should work on finding beats that are more suited to your lyrics. Other than that man, keep up the good work!! I can always appreciate someone else doing their thing.

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I feel your lyrics and the direction you are trying to go. I have some constructive criticism if you don't mind. You need to find beats that go with your lyrics a little better. You're not really riding the beat too well. Get what I am trying to say? It's like the words don't mesh with beats.

That's my brother....see how his lyrics flow right along with the music? I think you should work on finding beats that are more suited to your lyrics. Other than that man, keep up the good work!! I can always appreciate someone else doing their thing.

I know what you mean, thanks for the advice. That is rough, quickily made in 15 mins xD. I will be recording i a studio soon. I also have a cold xD unfortunately. But ya i know what you mean, i wasnt feeling it , just kinda did it if you know what i mean xD. but soon this and others will be remade in a studio and ill repost. Your bro is a good rapper too.

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I know what you mean, thanks for the advice. That is rough, quickily made in 15 mins xD. I will be recording i a studio soon. I also have a cold xD unfortunately. But ya i know what you mean, i wasnt feeling it , just kinda did it if you know what i mean xD. but soon this and others will be remade in a studio and ill repost. Your bro is a good rapper too.

Thanks, it is something me and him just mess around and do in our free time(when we have it). And just keep at it man, Rome wasn't built in a day. Always nice to see someone doing something they love. Just don't let anyone tell you that you can't do it, or aren't any good. Looking forward to hearing more!!

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