Helen of Annoy Posted September 23, 2012 #801 Share Posted September 23, 2012 (edited) carries us away floaters of destiny we neither live nor die Edited September 23, 2012 by Helen of Annoy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spud the mackem Posted September 23, 2012 #802 Share Posted September 23, 2012 But lives swirl round it the whirlpool of life but death takes us all at the end of the day Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+joc Posted September 23, 2012 #803 Share Posted September 23, 2012 (edited) But lives swirl round it the whirlpool of life but death takes us all at the end of the day Use the last sentence Next use seven syllables The last line is five Example: The last line is five Mary has seven lambies first, last line have five Edited September 23, 2012 by joc Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_Only Posted September 23, 2012 #804 Share Posted September 23, 2012 (edited) first, last line have five the meat goes in between, here now more potatoes Edited September 23, 2012 by _Only Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
orangepeaceful79 Posted September 23, 2012 #805 Share Posted September 23, 2012 now more potatoes? i can has muchly more some? syntax comes and goes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+joc Posted September 23, 2012 #806 Share Posted September 23, 2012 syntax comes and goes but the Light shines forever marking our paths bright 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sarah_444 Posted September 23, 2012 Author #807 Share Posted September 23, 2012 Marking our paths bright To awaken our souls from Vast hibernation 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
orangepeaceful79 Posted September 24, 2012 #808 Share Posted September 24, 2012 Vast hibernation morning breath and messy hair far as the eye sees Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_Only Posted September 24, 2012 #809 Share Posted September 24, 2012 far as the eye sees the lengths that I will go to distance in your eyes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sarah_444 Posted September 24, 2012 Author #810 Share Posted September 24, 2012 Distance in your eyes Reflecting infinite blue Face shining, aglow 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+joc Posted September 24, 2012 #811 Share Posted September 24, 2012 Face shining, aglow the essence of true beauty Absorbing Love's life 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+OverSword Posted September 24, 2012 #812 Share Posted September 24, 2012 absorbing love's life one moment, infinity the next my heart beats 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+ouija ouija Posted September 24, 2012 #813 Share Posted September 24, 2012 (edited) the next my heart beats pauses, stunned, in awe of Life resumes it's beating Edited September 24, 2012 by ouija ouija 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Helen of Annoy Posted September 24, 2012 #814 Share Posted September 24, 2012 resumes it’s beating parasympathicus not so autonomic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+OverSword Posted September 24, 2012 #815 Share Posted September 24, 2012 so autonomic my feelings come, uncontrolled my vision, blurry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+ouija ouija Posted September 24, 2012 #816 Share Posted September 24, 2012 my vision, blurry can make out only vague shape of tsunami surge 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+OverSword Posted September 24, 2012 #817 Share Posted September 24, 2012 of tsunami surge many stories of anguish I cry for Japan 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sarah_444 Posted September 25, 2012 Author #818 Share Posted September 25, 2012 I cry for Japan Watching cherry blossoms fall Bud of hope opens 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+joc Posted September 25, 2012 #819 Share Posted September 25, 2012 Bud of hope opens with thy pedals fragrant blessed thou art my bouquet 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+OverSword Posted September 26, 2012 #820 Share Posted September 26, 2012 thou art my bouquet since my farts smell like roses I've got a dozen Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Order66 Posted September 27, 2012 #821 Share Posted September 27, 2012 I've got a dozen, I'm in the friend zone ... no soup for me, only 'sup' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_Only Posted September 27, 2012 #822 Share Posted September 27, 2012 (edited) for me, only 'sup' but this ballgame ain't over for me, _Only's up Edited September 27, 2012 by _Only Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
booNyzarC Posted September 27, 2012 #823 Share Posted September 27, 2012 for me, _Only's up yet what goes up must come down someone will catch you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+joc Posted September 27, 2012 #824 Share Posted September 27, 2012 (edited) someone will catch you freefalling through the abyss many hands are there Edited September 27, 2012 by joc Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+OverSword Posted September 27, 2012 #825 Share Posted September 27, 2012 many hands are there bloody stains of innocents washed away by time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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