_Only Posted June 1, 2012 #76 Share Posted June 1, 2012 (edited) are big and bright, those moments that come, saying ecstasy was here Edited June 1, 2012 by _Only Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nativechick1989 Posted June 2, 2012 #77 Share Posted June 2, 2012 ecstasy was here but that time has come and gone there are no repeats Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Left-Field Posted June 2, 2012 #78 Share Posted June 2, 2012 There are no repeats Own your life reality Look in the mirror Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Helen of Annoy Posted June 2, 2012 #79 Share Posted June 2, 2012 Look in the mirror meet the one that bites your lips still afraid of dark Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sarah_444 Posted June 2, 2012 Author #80 Share Posted June 2, 2012 still afraid of dark flames of candles flickering shadows creeping back Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Helen of Annoy Posted June 2, 2012 #81 Share Posted June 2, 2012 shadows creeping back into the night that bred worse reflected nightmare Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Madeline Posted June 2, 2012 #82 Share Posted June 2, 2012 reflected nightmare ghosts beware the night has eyes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_Only Posted June 2, 2012 #83 Share Posted June 2, 2012 the night has eyes world awakens after dark i see what you see Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sarah_444 Posted June 2, 2012 Author #84 Share Posted June 2, 2012 i see what you see vividly painted with words flashing in my mind 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
orangepeaceful79 Posted June 3, 2012 #85 Share Posted June 3, 2012 flashing in my mind images of you and I together hands grasp Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Left-Field Posted June 3, 2012 #86 Share Posted June 3, 2012 Together hands grasp People in their church's pews Holy, holy now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Helen of Annoy Posted June 3, 2012 #87 Share Posted June 3, 2012 Holy, holy now I hear their rotten minds’ panting in awkward silence Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Madeline Posted June 3, 2012 #88 Share Posted June 3, 2012 in awkward silence she stands naked wanting her clothes back Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Helen of Annoy Posted June 3, 2012 #89 Share Posted June 3, 2012 wanting her clothes back once when leaves are gone, but now let it all hang out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
orangepeaceful79 Posted June 3, 2012 #90 Share Posted June 3, 2012 let it all hang out Clothes drying, flapping in breeze gentle slap of sheets Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Helen of Annoy Posted June 3, 2012 #91 Share Posted June 3, 2012 gentle slap of sheets ghosts of children don’t grow up sadness turns to rage Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Madeline Posted June 3, 2012 #92 Share Posted June 3, 2012 gentle slap of sheets until the wind blows and they're turned to shreds 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
orangepeaceful79 Posted June 3, 2012 #93 Share Posted June 3, 2012 (edited) gentle slap of sheets until the wind blows and they're turned to shreds Hey Madeline Just a bit of haiku lesson for you. The first line is 5 syllables, the second line must be 7 syllables, and the third line is 5 syllables again. Otherwise you aren't writing haiku and it doesn't technically belong in this thread. I just happened to notice most of yours are 5, 5, 5.......it was driving some part of my brain nuts......hope I don't offend. Edited June 3, 2012 by orangepeaceful79 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
orangepeaceful79 Posted June 3, 2012 #94 Share Posted June 3, 2012 Hope I don't offend Just want to write silly poems and enjoy format Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_Only Posted June 3, 2012 #95 Share Posted June 3, 2012 and enjoy format, but keep it free as the path of air I also don't mean to offend anyone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Madeline Posted June 3, 2012 #96 Share Posted June 3, 2012 and enjoy format, but keep it free as the path of air I also don't mean to offend anyone. as the path of air has gone to the mountain so must I go too (Sorry, I will put more thought into it) Now you'all can stop gritting your teeth I'm not offended, I like to learn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+joc Posted June 4, 2012 #97 Share Posted June 4, 2012 so I must go too as those who have gone before Wait, I think I'll stay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Helen of Annoy Posted June 4, 2012 #98 Share Posted June 4, 2012 Wait, I think I’ll stay to annoy or to amuse which me you want, choose Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+ouija ouija Posted June 4, 2012 #99 Share Posted June 4, 2012 which me you want, choose I am flexible and cool I go with the flow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_Only Posted June 4, 2012 #100 Share Posted June 4, 2012 I go with the flow bobbing and dipping under the water is harsh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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