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[Archived] {un}holy haiku (Part 2)


sarah_444

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there to guide the way

the choice is yours when we talk

you have learned how to

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fried green tomatoes

make me feel ill; I prefer

red ones straight from vine

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sweetest kiss of death

a slight sniff of me

you will be mine for all time

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daylight and the sun

noon its above my head

quench this thirst

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daylight and sun

burns the feeble untrained eye,

for darkness is home

quench this thirst

parched cracked lips long for moisture

from a gentle kiss

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sweetest kiss of death

a slight sniff of me

you will be mine for all time

hey Ast.. here is how it works.. it first line 5 syllables, second line 7, and third line 5 syllables.. so you should of switched the bottom lines and it would of been ok..

second time today someone has beaten me by a minute or so..

so lets make it:

a slight sniff of me

the rainbow smelt like christmas

its that time of year

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ok.. crap.. we are all over eachother.. i dont know why this forum doesnt show you who has posted before you, when you got to post..?

for darkness is home

the words that maketh murder

in the dark places

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its that time of year

rainbow and unicorn tears fall

unexpectadly

(closer)

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its that time of year

rainbow and unicorn tears fall

unexpectadly

(closer)

the middle line is 8 syllables.. it has to be 7..

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(try one more)

its that time of year

rainbows and unicorns fall

unexpectadly

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you got it mister

bells be for a ringing

in mistletoe

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Where blushing lips meet

dream roses bloom redder with

each thorn tearing skin

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daylight and the sun

noon its above my head

quench this thirst

hey Ast.. here is how it works.. it first line 5 syllables, second line 7, and third line 5 syllables.. so you should of switched the bottom lines and it would of been ok..

second time today someone has beaten me by a minute or so..

so lets make it:

a slight sniff of me

the rainbow smelt like christmas

its that time of year

ok.. crap.. we are all over eachother.. i dont know why this forum doesnt show you who has posted before you, when you got to post..?

for darkness is home

the words that maketh murder

in the dark places

its that time of year

rainbow and unicorn tears fall

unexpectadly

(closer)

the middle line is 8 syllables.. it has to be 7..

(try one more)

its that time of year

rainbows and unicorns fall

unexpectadly

unexpectedly

bingo, its legs eleven

you got it mister

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@with bells on: sometimes a notification comes up on the screen to tell you someone else has just posted while you're typing, but it's very discreet so if you happen to be looking at the keyboard or elsewhere when it briefly pops up, well ................

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down the rabbit hole

fearless for on this trip there’s

no place for baggage

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