Popular Post Mistydawn Posted November 6, 2012 Popular Post #1 Share Posted November 6, 2012 The sun going down Birds flock together, flying to roost And I am waiting The air chilling The clock ticking, ,boom boom And I am waiting Night into day Day into night, nervous my plight And I am waiting Shadows gather in the room Tomorrow looms, uncertainty blooms And yet still, I am waiting. Bowing head Reminiscent thoughts, candid and frank Waiting Hovering near Every loathe-some fear, dread knocks And I am waiting Expectant tremors Diagnosis death, and yet I am waiting. 12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knight Of Shadows Posted November 6, 2012 #2 Share Posted November 6, 2012 that's brilliantly written and gloomy in good way aren't we all always waiting ? it's very nice i like it 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mistydawn Posted November 6, 2012 Author #3 Share Posted November 6, 2012 thank you Knight, appreaciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ashotep Posted November 6, 2012 #4 Share Posted November 6, 2012 That was so good. It seems we are all waiting, sometimes for something that will never comes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mistydawn Posted November 6, 2012 Author #5 Share Posted November 6, 2012 Thank you Hilander for your thoughts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Still Waters Posted November 6, 2012 #6 Share Posted November 6, 2012 tick tock..... very well written Misty. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mistydawn Posted November 7, 2012 Author #7 Share Posted November 7, 2012 tick tock..... very well written Misty. Thank you so much for your support Stilly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor T Posted November 8, 2012 #8 Share Posted November 8, 2012 very nice.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mistydawn Posted November 9, 2012 Author #9 Share Posted November 9, 2012 Thanks for your comment Prof T Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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