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Knight Of Shadows

Pretending

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can we pretend for a second mere that darkness is gone and the light is here

and from the mist of years outside my dreams you appear

can we pretend the world is unending and the moments pass slowly and our love impending

and from the shadows of a weary day you pass this way

the path you came spread out with roses the sun engulf the moon and her light imposes

and from the shine in your eyes the stars shy away and hide in the skies

gracefully the trees are dancing in the breeze the silver rivers flowing with ease

although there's no heaven or hell to the endless abyss of love we fell

as i wake up from my peaceful slumber to a world where darkness chases to conquer

and in my hands those roses sear as i try to keep them near

the world is dark and filled with sorrow no one knows what tragic fate comes tomorrow

meaningless comes the morrow and yet we struggle to follow

the path i came torched with flames the sun sinks in darkness and hide with shame

the time chasing years to kill and daylight has fallen ill

i've seen darkness buries the sun , the winds and fog played catch and run

the rivers goes all wrong and the current is raging strong

and we're caught up in the middle of this song

the trees overcomed sink underneath the earth , inhaling frustration in final attempt of rebirth

there's a life versus vice , a song never to be played twice

and still here we dance on melting ice

but through nocturnal charm through the horizon and endless depth afar

with auguries of daylight , in the company of gusts of delight

a fragment comes to life waiting for a hope , hanging to life by a tender rope

a white dove takes a flight towards the last dying light

reunited with what used to be a lovely velvet sky

chasing traces of delight as they desperately fly

as my pen lies helpless in my hand every letter i write turns to sand

wandering if it's too late as the rolling dice plays my fate

tons of torn letters lies restless in the fire

left with nothing but an insatiable desire

how many times i tried to write you off my head

but my heart always been one step ahead

i finally lay down to sleep and deep in my heart your memory i will keep

will the waves of tide bring you back to me or will they always flee

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KOS I had no idea you felt this way about me...I'm very flattered lol jk!

Serious though, that's beautiful :)

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hehehe thanks VV for your kind comment

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I knew people from hell weren't that bad lol does it cool off at all down there for winter?

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did you write this knight?

its really beautiful.. the whole poem is perfect.. was a joy to read.. thanks for sharing.. you should publish it..

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I knew people from hell weren't that bad lol does it cool off at all down there for winter?

i guess am special .. carefull of flames :P

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did you write this knight?

its really beautiful.. the whole poem is perfect.. was a joy to read.. thanks for sharing.. you should publish it..

i don't write daily or often only at certain moods as hobby

thanks for passing by and comment man glad you enjoyed it

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you're a true artist and a talent..

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That was truely brilliant..

:tu:

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That was truely brilliant..

:tu:

thanks mate glad you liked it

you're a true artist and a talent..

i approicate it thanks

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can we pretend for a second mere that darkness is gone and the light is here

and from the mist of years outside my dreams you appear

can we pretend the world is unending and the moments pass slowly and our love impending

and from the shadows of a weary day you pass this way

the path you came spread out with roses the sun engulf the moon and her light imposes

and from the shine in your eyes the stars shy away and hide in the skies

gracefully the trees are dancing in the breeze the silver rivers flowing with ease

although there's no heaven or hell to the endless abyss of love we fell

as i wake up from my peaceful slumber to a world where darkness chases to conquer

and in my hands those roses sear as i try to keep them near

the world is dark and filled with sorrow no one knows what tragic fate comes tomorrow

meaningless comes the morrow and yet we struggle to follow

the path i came torched with flames the sun sinks in darkness and hide with shame

the time chasing years to kill and daylight has fallen ill

i've seen darkness buries the sun , the winds and fog played catch and run

the rivers goes all wrong and the current is raging strong

and we're caught up in the middle of this song

the trees overcomed sink underneath the earth , inhaling frustration in final attempt of rebirth

there's a life versus vice , a song never to be played twice

and still here we dance on melting ice

but through nocturnal charm through the horizon and endless depth afar

with auguries of daylight , in the company of gusts of delight

a fragment comes to life waiting for a hope , hanging to life by a tender rope

a white dove takes a flight towards the last dying light

reunited with what used to be a lovely velvet sky

chasing traces of delight as they desperately fly

as my pen lies helpless in my hand every letter i write turns to sand

wandering if it's too late as the rolling dice plays my fate

tons of torn letters lies restless in the fire

left with nothing but an insatiable desire

how many times i tried to write you off my head

but my heart always been one step ahead

i finally lay down to sleep and deep in my heart your memory i will keep

will the waves of tide bring you back to me or will they always flee

It's gorgeous, and saddening...Love it.

KOS I had no idea you felt this way about me...I'm very flattered lol jk!

Serious though, that's beautiful :)

Darn, I wish someone would write stuff like this for me

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It's gorgeous, and saddening...Love it.

Darn, I wish someone would write stuff like this for me

Okay....ahem.

Roses are red, violets are blue

If hearts were for breaking, we'd be born with two

That should really be published its pretty amazing ahaha that's all I got :P

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Okay....ahem.

Roses are red, violets are blue

If hearts were for breaking, we'd be born with two

That should really be published its pretty amazing ahaha that's all I got :P

*wipes a tear from my eye* absolutely brilliant, standing ovation :P

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ohh you two .. if you wanna kiss let me know in advance to get my camera

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ohh you two .. if you wanna kiss let me know in advance to get my camera

Oh baby!

Okay....ahem.

Roses are red, violets are blue

If hearts were for breaking, we'd be born with two

That should really be published its pretty amazing ahaha that's all I got :P

Oh, oh, my turn!

Roses are red, violets are blue

....what rhymes with blue?

Well, it's a work in progress.

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Oh baby!

Oh, oh, my turn!

Roses are red, violets are blue

....what rhymes with blue?

Well, it's a work in progress.

if i had them both i'd give them all to you :P

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Oh baby!

Oh, oh, my turn!

Roses are red, violets are blue

....what rhymes with blue?

Well, it's a work in progress.

Its perfect! Don't change a thing I love it! lol

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