Clarakore Posted November 27, 2012 #1 Share Posted November 27, 2012 (edited) It was the end of the county fair firework displays in the clean air "people will pay a million for this" my old man would say breathing it in the scent of gunpowder becoming feint arrows and pistols, cowboys and you in the middle of town square it's us versus them and we're going to win the war should be splendid land for green, green miles soldiers and ufos and mindless drones they are listening in on your cell phone I don't like to feel like a loser and right now you are making me feel like one because they lied to us on nine-eleven this breathing it square and we're drones cell phone one nine-eleven... Edited November 27, 2012 by I believe you 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mistydawn Posted November 28, 2012 #2 Share Posted November 28, 2012 Wao, awesome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cobalt60 Posted November 29, 2012 #3 Share Posted November 29, 2012 I don't understand why, but something about it reminded me of a few of Ray Bradbury's works... Thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clarakore Posted November 30, 2012 Author #4 Share Posted November 30, 2012 Thank you both. This is the greatest response I've had so feels great and thanks again. It was quite spontaneous. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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