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BNDGK

Wont You Join Me?

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So as I said before; I would like you to know that I am a servant to my imagination, and the poems that I compose may or may not reflect my views, feelings, or actions. Also, I will add that this material is seemingly low grade for me. Usually my creations are better. Alas, I must share what has been created.

There is a meaning

Behind my words,

My poems and stories

That can't go unheard.

Behind my creations

I boldly stand,

But sometimes I write things,

I don’t understand.

I can write about freedom,

Peace and Love,

Or softer things,

Wing beats of doves

I speak from my heart

And write from my soul,

It hides my flaws,

And makes me feel whole.

Sometimes I am bursting

With poem and song,

Other time what I write,

Just seems so wrong.

Oh wont you join me,

In this movement of creation?

To light up the world,

The children, the nation.

With stories and songs

And poems and dances,

About daring adventures

And soothing romances.

So, my friend come

And with me proudly stand,

With notebooks, and pencils,

Poised in our hands.

And release ourselves

From the curses of old,

To unite our country

With art from the soul.

Also; I love feedback!! Good or bad! I just like to hear ideas and critiques but please be nice :)

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Not bad :)

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Not bad :)

Thanks :) I've done better though..

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Thanks :) I've done better though..

I'm looking forward to the next one :yes::tu: Edited by CuriousGreek

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I'm looking forward to the next one :yes::tu:

I also did a poem on here not that long ago called Trapped. Did you see it?

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I also did a poem on here not that long ago called Trapped. Did you see it?

Just read it. It was really great!!! You are very good :)

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Just read it. It was really great!!! You are very good :)

Thanks :) It was some of my better poetry.

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Thanks :) It was some of my better poetry.

Thank you for sharing it with us. Hope we'll be seeing more of your poems in the future :)

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Forgive the spelling errors....... There are 2 of them........ :wacko:

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I have me pad 'n' pen

I am ready to subscribe the scrawl that strives to raise us all

from mental drivel to finest climbs

of mind and spirit

of word, action, deed and rhythm

to dance upon the graves of old

of those who stopped the good from being bold and true

to each other in benevolence

I aim my words to comfort and glue the broken pieces of our nations

and build a tomorrow

invigorated

a new : )

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I have me pad 'n' pen

I am ready to subscribe the scrawl that strives to raise us all

from mental drivel to finest climbs

of mind and spirit

of word, action, deed and rhythm

to dance upon the graves of old

of those who stopped the good from being bold and true

to each other in benevolence

I aim my words to comfort and glue the broken pieces of our nations

and build a tomorrow

invigorated

a new : )

Nice!!! I love it!!! :D

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