BNDGK Posted December 18, 2012 #1 Share Posted December 18, 2012 (edited) So as I said before; I would like you to know that I am a servant to my imagination, and the poems that I compose may or may not reflect my views, feelings, or actions. Also, I will add that this material is seemingly low grade for me. Usually my creations are better. Alas, I must share what has been created. There is a meaning Behind my words, My poems and stories That can't go unheard. Behind my creations I boldly stand, But sometimes I write things, I don’t understand. I can write about freedom, Peace and Love, Or softer things, Wing beats of doves I speak from my heart And write from my soul, It hides my flaws, And makes me feel whole. Sometimes I am bursting With poem and song, Other time what I write, Just seems so wrong. Oh wont you join me, In this movement of creation? To light up the world, The children, the nation. With stories and songs And poems and dances, About daring adventures And soothing romances. So, my friend come And with me proudly stand, With notebooks, and pencils, Poised in our hands. And release ourselves From the curses of old, To unite our country With art from the soul. Also; I love feedback!! Good or bad! I just like to hear ideas and critiques but please be nice Edited December 18, 2012 by BNDGK 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CuriousGreek Posted December 18, 2012 #2 Share Posted December 18, 2012 Not bad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BNDGK Posted December 18, 2012 Author #3 Share Posted December 18, 2012 Not bad Thanks I've done better though.. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CuriousGreek Posted December 18, 2012 #4 Share Posted December 18, 2012 (edited) Thanks I've done better though.. I'm looking forward to the next one Edited December 18, 2012 by CuriousGreek Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BNDGK Posted December 18, 2012 Author #5 Share Posted December 18, 2012 I'm looking forward to the next one I also did a poem on here not that long ago called Trapped. Did you see it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CuriousGreek Posted December 18, 2012 #6 Share Posted December 18, 2012 I also did a poem on here not that long ago called Trapped. Did you see it? Just read it. It was really great!!! You are very good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BNDGK Posted December 18, 2012 Author #7 Share Posted December 18, 2012 Just read it. It was really great!!! You are very good Thanks It was some of my better poetry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CuriousGreek Posted December 18, 2012 #8 Share Posted December 18, 2012 Thanks It was some of my better poetry. Thank you for sharing it with us. Hope we'll be seeing more of your poems in the future Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BNDGK Posted December 18, 2012 Author #9 Share Posted December 18, 2012 Forgive the spelling errors....... There are 2 of them........ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blue Star Posted December 19, 2012 #10 Share Posted December 19, 2012 I have me pad 'n' pen I am ready to subscribe the scrawl that strives to raise us all from mental drivel to finest climbs of mind and spirit of word, action, deed and rhythm to dance upon the graves of old of those who stopped the good from being bold and true to each other in benevolence I aim my words to comfort and glue the broken pieces of our nations and build a tomorrow invigorated a new : ) 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BNDGK Posted December 19, 2012 Author #11 Share Posted December 19, 2012 I have me pad 'n' pen I am ready to subscribe the scrawl that strives to raise us all from mental drivel to finest climbs of mind and spirit of word, action, deed and rhythm to dance upon the graves of old of those who stopped the good from being bold and true to each other in benevolence I aim my words to comfort and glue the broken pieces of our nations and build a tomorrow invigorated a new : ) Nice!!! I love it!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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