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AsteroidX

My 1st Be Gentle

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Its my 2nd Amendment

and every other Red Blooded American

because you failed

to follow

the recomendations of the founding fathers

to compulsory train every man

as we have correqural school

that wont be my problem

today.

I will be no matter what

you try to take away

I am the 1st Amendment

the 2nd Amendment protects me.

Try to take my rights away

you may get to feel me.

I am the pulse of America.

I have red blood and I bleed too

Today I am innocent.

My hands are free.

I intend to keep them next to me.

Dont ever **** with me

because I am free.

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Source of quote?

Is this your own work?

Edited by Lilly
clarification

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That is my own work guided with inspirational words

the quote came because irt started as apost then i tried to refine it to a "poem"

Posted Today, 03:18 AM

where we going with this cause Im onboard. Its my 2nd Amendment and every other Red Blooded American because you failed to follow the recomendations of the founding fathers to compulsory train every man as if was correqural school that wont be my problem today. Iam therefore I will be no matter what you try to take away. I am the 1st Amendment and the 2nd Amendment protects me. Try to take my rights away and you may get to feel me. I am the pulse of America. I have red blood and I bleed to. Today I am innocent. My hands are free. I intend to keep them next to me. Dont ever **** with me because I am free.

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Kudos that you did not try to rhyme every other word! Modern poetry has largely abandoned that practice.

That you were inspired to create something just by a post shows the soul of an artist. Keep at it.

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Thank You.

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