_Only Posted January 28, 2013 #1 Share Posted January 28, 2013 They told me to find myself But I didn't know where to look I know there is something more to me But where? I can feel it so close But reach out and touch air I don't know how to chase it Or even where to start Surely it is smarter than me And better fit to make us meet So I look forward and wait patiently For someone who belongs by my side I will keep looking out Vowing to not take a step in the wrong direction I will be a statue I won't turn my back Pushing out the fear in the back of my mind That it may be doing the same 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_Only Posted January 28, 2013 Author #2 Share Posted January 28, 2013 (edited) Well, I just realized I wrote a few lines out of order. Should have been this: They told me to find myself But I didn't know where to look I know there is something more to me But where? I can feel it so close But reach out and touch air I don't know how to chase it Or even where to start Surely it is smarter than me And better fit to make us meet So I look forward and wait patiently For someone who belongs by my side I will be a statue I won't turn my back I will keep looking out Vowing to not take a step in the wrong direction Pushing out the fear in the back of my mind That it may be doing the same Edited January 28, 2013 by _Only 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SpiritWriter Posted January 28, 2013 #3 Share Posted January 28, 2013 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clarakore Posted January 28, 2013 #4 Share Posted January 28, 2013 Awesome vigil of twin flames. I like the affirmations the main character recites. The mission, seems serious, these things always are. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MedicTJ Posted January 31, 2013 #5 Share Posted January 31, 2013 "I will be a statueI won't turn my back" I love that line. The entire thing is good, but that just resonated with me. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mistydawn Posted January 31, 2013 #6 Share Posted January 31, 2013 Excellent -Only. I wish I could write like you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Still Waters Posted February 4, 2013 #7 Share Posted February 4, 2013 Very good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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