SpiritWriter Posted February 3, 2013 #1 Share Posted February 3, 2013 My love is as nothing and so I chop it up and put it in the ground. I light flames as if words were not enough, that their flickerings would talk and talk to heaven. My hands should be severed for I am a magician. I make smooth the surface of the mound. A girthy stalk of hearty leaves punctures through the clouds. 5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clarakore Posted February 3, 2013 #2 Share Posted February 3, 2013 My love is as nothing and so I chop it up and put it in the ground. I light flames as if words were not enough, that their flickerings would talk and talk to heaven. My hands should be severed for I am a magician. I make smooth the surface of the mound. A girthy stalk of hearty leaves punctures through the clouds. This reminds me of small pieces of paper I used to write things on then burn them in ritual so my thoughts would be amplified, love spells and the like. It also causes me to think about my prayers, how they at times can be very self-centered in the same manner, but please leave me my hands. Very simple yet grande again. I like this series of poems you are sharing with us lately. Poems like this have so much going on with so little said so just reading can make our mind wander all over the place, wish I really knew what this one was about. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultima Weapon Posted February 3, 2013 #3 Share Posted February 3, 2013 Nice. I like it. I need to post my own poetry some time... I'm just always nervous of possible ridicule... 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SpiritWriter Posted February 3, 2013 Author #4 Share Posted February 3, 2013 Nice. I like it. I need to post my own poetry some time... I'm just always nervous of possible ridicule... Don't be nervous friend... poetry is a great way to explore and share your heart.. Only post what you feel like sharing and dont listen to the naysayers.. We have to get use to ridicule anyway if we want to be ever able to voice our true opinions or speak up for anything/anyone... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SpiritWriter Posted February 3, 2013 Author #5 Share Posted February 3, 2013 This reminds me of small pieces of paper I used to write things on then burn them in ritual so my thoughts would be amplified, love spells and the like. It also causes me to think about my prayers, how they at times can be very self-centered in the same manner, but please leave me my hands. Very simple yet grande again. I like this series of poems you are sharing with us lately. Poems like this have so much going on with so little said so just reading can make our mind wander all over the place, wish I really knew what this one was about. You already know what its about.. you just said it... poetry is for the reader as much as the author, so what it spoke to you, that's what its about.. Thanks for your responses I believe you... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mistydawn Posted February 3, 2013 #6 Share Posted February 3, 2013 (edited) My love is as nothing and so I chop it up and put it in the ground. I light flames as if words were not enough, that their flickerings would talk and talk to heaven. My hands should be severed for I am a magician. I make smooth the surface of the mound. A girthy stalk of hearty leaves punctures through the clouds. Okay, now I'm scared!! Great writing SpiritWriter! Edited February 3, 2013 by Mistydawn 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
theSOURCE Posted February 3, 2013 #7 Share Posted February 3, 2013 (edited) That's it! I quit writing poetry. Your poem just blew all my previous attempts at writing poetry clear out of the water. Very nice SpiritWriter. Edited February 3, 2013 by theSOURCE 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SpiritWriter Posted February 3, 2013 Author #8 Share Posted February 3, 2013 Aww thanks guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultima Weapon Posted February 5, 2013 #9 Share Posted February 5, 2013 Don't be nervous friend... poetry is a great way to explore and share your heart.. Only post what you feel like sharing and dont listen to the naysayers.. We have to get use to ridicule anyway if we want to be ever able to voice our true opinions or speak up for anything/anyone... What the hell, why not?... It's not like it matters anyway... Might as well just lay it all out... 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sarah_444 Posted February 5, 2013 #10 Share Posted February 5, 2013 (edited) Beautiful & intense. Love this one, SpiritWriter. Edited February 5, 2013 by sarah_444 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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