Popular Post BNDGK Posted February 13, 2013 Popular Post #1 Share Posted February 13, 2013 (edited) Um i'll admit, i'm a little nervous about this one, i'm really not sure what to think of it. Again (I know you're tired of hearing this but): Remember that I am a servant to my imagination and the poems that i compose may or may not reflect my views, feelings, or actions. Well, here we go... The paths i've taken The roads traversed, The words most spoken Like lines rehearsed, Add insult to injury Turn bad to worse, Lay down emotion The words in verse. The things i meant, The things i said, Things only clear Within my head. To take it back, Every last word, And instead express The things unheard. 'Twould be a gift If only to one, Who's heard what i've said And knows what i've done. So many things to tell, So much to say. I'm terrified to tell you, Will you turn away? If i had the courage To speak my mind, To not leave the moment Unfinished behind; I'd tell you first To listen to every word, Never let one sentence Go unknown or unheard. Then like a river, The words would flow Expressing my feelings, In one single blow. I'd let it all loose In that moment in time, Like writing a poem And creating a rhyme. And when i am finished I'd hope that you'd stay, Hold me and promise you'd never go away. Eh, a little romanticized i guess but... oh well. Hope you enjoyed it, please leave any suggestions or thoughts below, i love feedback! Edited February 13, 2013 by BNDGK 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ever Learning Posted February 13, 2013 #2 Share Posted February 13, 2013 I enjoyed this 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Still Waters Posted February 13, 2013 #3 Share Posted February 13, 2013 Eh, a little romanticized i guess but... oh well. Hope you enjoyed it, please leave any suggestions or thoughts below, i love feedback! I like romanticized, and I enjoyed your poem. Very good 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BNDGK Posted February 13, 2013 Author #4 Share Posted February 13, 2013 (edited) I enjoyed this Thanks a bunch AE Edited February 13, 2013 by BNDGK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BNDGK Posted February 13, 2013 Author #5 Share Posted February 13, 2013 I like romanticized, and I enjoyed your poem. Very good Thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
theSOURCE Posted February 14, 2013 #6 Share Posted February 14, 2013 Wow! This sounded great through my text reader. I like this very much. Well done ! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BNDGK Posted February 14, 2013 Author #7 Share Posted February 14, 2013 Wow! This sounded great through my text reader. I like this very much. Well done ! Thank you so much! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arcana Posted February 17, 2013 #8 Share Posted February 17, 2013 I think it's awesome BNDGK, love the lyrical rhymes and the flow. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BNDGK Posted March 3, 2013 Author #9 Share Posted March 3, 2013 Thanks Arcana, im not sure how i've missed that comment for almost a month lol apologies for the late reply I think it's awesome BNDGK, love the lyrical rhymes and the flow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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