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Mistydawn

A New day Dawns

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Asteroid skims over Earths atmosphere

Fat human skims teeth over beef-burger

Or possibly it’s a horse-burger

Conglomerates of money-makers gasp at Market Trends

Children play in concrete yards

Ready for home, homework and bed

Dream of play and freedom

Conglomerates of money-makers content at end of day

Traffic builds up over the bridge, along the highway

Gasoline and diesel fumes mingle

“The clouds are interesting to view tonight,“ says Mabel

Conglomerates of money-makers drink long into the night

Hand held out begging an old man with no sight

Young girl runs for all her might

Swallows duck and dive, survive

Conglomerates of money-makers fight to gain more might

Daytime News for all who view

Give weather updates and insight

What you can do with money earned to brighten-up your life

Conglomerates of money-makers say enough’s enough for today

In restful repose men die fearful

Anger frustration and dread linger

The world turns on it’s axle and

Conglomerates of money-makers wake to a new day

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that's quite covers the terriable things greed can do to humans .. or that's how i saw it

but great poem none the less and amazing structure !

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You are an extraordinary verser so I am very honoured you took time to read and comment. Thank you very much. :nw:

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I like your profile picture.

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I like your profile picture.

what did you think about my poem?

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what did you think about my poem?

Apocalyptic...interadesting.

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Apocalyptic...interadesting.

Apocalyptic...interadesting.

Thank you Sean.

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You are an extraordinary verser so I am very honoured you took time to read and comment. Thank you very much. :nw:

ohh please am just a guy with terriable english some people find it interesting :D

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ohh please am just a guy with terriable english some people find it interesting :D

ohh please am just a guy with terriable english some people find it interesting :D

Terrilble English my posterior! You poems are brilliant, end of.

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hmmm.... I am swimming in familiar waters ... to drown in the pockets of the rich ... :tu:

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third_eye and Source, thank you both so much for reading and for your comments. :-*

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Love it Misty, a very different avenue explored with your great creativity and it resonates with me deeply. Thank you for sharing your talent and your heart. :tu:

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Very evocative and powerful, MD, brilliant!

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This is a good poem. I've read it a few times now and each time it makes me think of the start to a movie. You know where they show different scenes of people going about their daily lives unaware of anything else happening in the world - well that's how it comes across when I'm reading it. I like it, well done Misty :)

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Well done Miss T.........as usual

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Thank you so much Arc, Schizy, Stilly and Cloudsy...four of my favourite peeps! :-*

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nice

you been reading bukowski

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