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Beastly Decimal

Can't Think of a Title...

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Can't Think of a Title..

Perfectly perplexed by the arranged thoughts

And inbred concepts

Clawing their way out from under my bed

Screwing their way into my head

And pinning my gray matter to the floor

Rejecting established methods

Of behaving and dressing

Rejecting the concept of shaving

Spiritually ousting your gods and their horns

Grinning sarcastically at the new morn

As it’s born, the innocent light of the dawn

Washing the blood of the twilight from my bruised eyes

Seeping into my bruised skin

And giving life to the dead optimist within

A new world waiting for me to dig in

It’s broken, my toolkit is waiting

Where to begin?

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Very nice, BD.

How about calling it "Holiday for a Battered Soul"? It reminds me of how my days off usually are.

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~contd

Grinning sarcastically at the new morn

As it’s born, the innocent light of the dawn

Washing the blood of the twilight from my bruised eyes

Seeping into my bruised skin

And giving life to the dead optimist within

A new world waiting for me to dig in

It’s broken, my toolkit is waiting

Where to begin?

good show :tu:

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Very good :tu: ..... If you where actually serious about asking our opinions on another name for it....Then mine would be any of the following but that's me....It's yours to do with what you will...

.Where to begin.

.My toolkit is waiting.

.Perfectly perplexed.

.Or stick with...... Can't Think Of A Title....

....All good.

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Very good :tu: ..... If you where actually serious about asking our opinions on another name for it....Then mine would be any of the following but that's me....It's yours to do with what you will...

.Where to begin.

.My toolkit is waiting.

.Perfectly perplexed.

.Or stick with...... Can't Think Of A Title....

....All good.

All of the suggested titles are good, but the poem is so disorganized and all-over-the-place that I'm not sure a name is appropriate. I've taken to calling it the very cliche title "Free Poem".

Titles aren't really my specialty, I'm afraid.

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Titles aren't really my specialty, I'm afraid.

Titles can be difficult to come up with, I have the same problem. In the end though it's what you write that matters the most I feel.

It's a good poem, titled or not :)

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