Beastly Decimal Posted February 26, 2013 #1 Share Posted February 26, 2013 Can't Think of a Title.. Perfectly perplexed by the arranged thoughts And inbred concepts Clawing their way out from under my bed Screwing their way into my head And pinning my gray matter to the floor Rejecting established methods Of behaving and dressing Rejecting the concept of shaving Spiritually ousting your gods and their horns Grinning sarcastically at the new morn As it’s born, the innocent light of the dawn Washing the blood of the twilight from my bruised eyes Seeping into my bruised skin And giving life to the dead optimist within A new world waiting for me to dig in It’s broken, my toolkit is waiting Where to begin? 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
theSOURCE Posted February 26, 2013 #2 Share Posted February 26, 2013 Very nice, BD. How about calling it "Holiday for a Battered Soul"? It reminds me of how my days off usually are. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHaYap Posted February 26, 2013 #3 Share Posted February 26, 2013 ~contd Grinning sarcastically at the new morn As it’s born, the innocent light of the dawn Washing the blood of the twilight from my bruised eyes Seeping into my bruised skin And giving life to the dead optimist within A new world waiting for me to dig in It’s broken, my toolkit is waiting Where to begin? good show Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blue Star Posted March 3, 2013 #4 Share Posted March 3, 2013 Very good ..... If you where actually serious about asking our opinions on another name for it....Then mine would be any of the following but that's me....It's yours to do with what you will... .Where to begin. .My toolkit is waiting. .Perfectly perplexed. .Or stick with...... Can't Think Of A Title.... ....All good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beastly Decimal Posted March 3, 2013 Author #5 Share Posted March 3, 2013 Very good ..... If you where actually serious about asking our opinions on another name for it....Then mine would be any of the following but that's me....It's yours to do with what you will... .Where to begin. .My toolkit is waiting. .Perfectly perplexed. .Or stick with...... Can't Think Of A Title.... ....All good. All of the suggested titles are good, but the poem is so disorganized and all-over-the-place that I'm not sure a name is appropriate. I've taken to calling it the very cliche title "Free Poem". Titles aren't really my specialty, I'm afraid. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Still Waters Posted March 3, 2013 #6 Share Posted March 3, 2013 Titles aren't really my specialty, I'm afraid. Titles can be difficult to come up with, I have the same problem. In the end though it's what you write that matters the most I feel. It's a good poem, titled or not Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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