Arcana Posted March 7, 2013 #1 Share Posted March 7, 2013 (edited) Love will set us free Once there was a time, my memory can't dismiss Swimming in your eyes, lost within your kiss Always holding hands, like the chambers of a heart Found in each other's arms, lost when prized apart You I could depend on, you're faithful 'til the end The one who's part of me and is my dearest friend Our bond was built on trust, freed from any ties We both felt so at ease, safe from any lies Our spirits soared together, gliding through the sky Our love was meant forever, to last as time goes by Separated in time, we went upon our way Cast further apart, with every passing day The centuries rolled by, like waves across the sea A faded memory whispers, like the rustling in a tree An echo from the past, is crawling through my mind I hear a distant voice, that's calling me to find I've lived so many lives and loved so many wives But always there was one, who nurtures and revives A flame that is my twin, the one who makes me whole Shielding me with love and wrapped around my soul When we find each other, through the ripples in the sand Stretched across a desert, in some far off foreign land Your smile is known to me, I'll know you when I see And when we meet again, our love will set us free © Arcana Edited March 7, 2013 by Arcana 6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BNDGK Posted March 7, 2013 #2 Share Posted March 7, 2013 Wow Arcana, really stunning! Nice flow, very great job. I really enjoy this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K_Bonita Posted March 7, 2013 #3 Share Posted March 7, 2013 Beautiful, I loved it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mistydawn Posted March 7, 2013 #4 Share Posted March 7, 2013 Oh wao Arc, just.... WAO!! That was truly beautiful! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Still Waters Posted March 7, 2013 #5 Share Posted March 7, 2013 I can only endorse what others have said...........absolutely beautiful! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
schizoidwoman Posted March 8, 2013 #6 Share Posted March 8, 2013 I have nothing new to add, it was wonderful! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arcana Posted March 8, 2013 Author #7 Share Posted March 8, 2013 Wow Arcana, really stunning! Nice flow, very great job. I really enjoy this Thank you so much BNDGK, your comment is greatly appreciated and I'm glad you enjoyed it. Beautiful, I loved it! Thank you K Bonita for your lovely comment.. Oh wao Arc, just.... WAO!! That was truly beautiful! I'm so pleased you enjoyed it Misty and TY for your wonderful comment. I can only endorse what others have said...........absolutely beautiful! TY Stilly, love is indeed a most beautiful and wondrous thing!. I have nothing new to add, it was wonderful! Thank you, I'm happy you like it Schiizzy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloudshill Posted March 9, 2013 #8 Share Posted March 9, 2013 Excellent, my friend... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arcana Posted March 11, 2013 Author #9 Share Posted March 11, 2013 Excellent, my friend... TY Cloudy my dear friend Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
theSOURCE Posted March 14, 2013 #10 Share Posted March 14, 2013 Very nicely done. I enjoyed listening to this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knight Of Shadows Posted March 16, 2013 #11 Share Posted March 16, 2013 amazingly written mate .. it's perfect good job man Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arcana Posted March 17, 2013 Author #12 Share Posted March 17, 2013 Very nicely done. I enjoyed listening to this. Thank you my friend, your comment is greatly appreciated. amazingly written mate .. it's perfect good job man WOW....Many thanks for your lovely comment Knight, glad you enjoyed it bro. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Himalayan Mystic Posted March 19, 2013 #13 Share Posted March 19, 2013 Love will set us free Once there was a time, my memory can't dismiss Swimming in your eyes, lost within your kiss Always holding hands, like the chambers of a heart Found in each other's arms, lost when prized apart You I could depend on, you're faithful 'til the end The one who's part of me and is my dearest friend Our bond was built on trust, freed from any ties We both felt so at ease, safe from any lies Our spirits soared together, gliding through the sky Our love was meant forever, to last as time goes by Separated in time, we went upon our way Cast further apart, with every passing day The centuries rolled by, like waves across the sea A faded memory whispers, like the rustling in a tree An echo from the past, is crawling through my mind I hear a distant voice, that's calling me to find I've lived so many lives and loved so many wives But always there was one, who nurtures and revives A flame that is my twin, the one who makes me whole Shielding me with love and wrapped around my soul When we find each other, through the ripples in the sand Stretched across a desert, in some far off foreign land Your smile is known to me, I'll know you when I see And when we meet again, our love will set us free © Arcana You poets are so cool!!!!!!!!!!What words,flow ,emotions tooooooo good!!!!!!!!! and i usually dont get poetry but if their is stuff like this then i should try to read stuff wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arcana Posted March 19, 2013 Author #14 Share Posted March 19, 2013 You poets are so cool!!!!!!!!!! What words,flow ,emotions tooooooo good!!!!!!!!! and i usually dont get poetry but if their is stuff like this then i should try to read stuff wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you for your lovely comment himalyanmystic, your kindness has put a smile on my face and made my day. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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