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third_eye

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the gentle lover evicts sleep,

for dreams, they steal from him her presence,

her breath conjures earthy apple blossoms,

on the sweetest summer wind,

there is a glowing, over the sky,

as if the sun fell into a bottle,

a petal, stranded on a withered rose,

dangling a speckle of hardened red,

so deep

that they see through each others' eyes

so in one

their heart beats each only, for one another

the gently loved, half asleep,

for dream and wakefulness is unveiled,

his heart thunders in her ears,

churns a shuddering sigh of passion,

do not pursue,

from where you know not from,

the world might end, while you are away

do not chase,

what you know not where they go,

you might have left heaven, behind,

the gentleness of tangled fingers,

together, gentle and gently,

received each other ...

~third_eye @SHaYAP©2013

~edit : fiddle diddle ...

Edited by third_eye
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I love how the sun falls into a bottle, a speckle of hardened red is also nice. ;)

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Well done..... :tu:

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Very nice poem :)

Your fiddle diddle edit is funny :D

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I love this one. The imagery is very potent.

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I love how the sun falls into a bottle, a speckle of hardened red is also nice. ;)

the first line and two that got this one moving .... was walking somewhere for dinner :)

Well done..... :tu:

Thanks be to you too

Very nice poem :)

Your fiddle diddle edit is funny :D

aye .... otherwise I would have fiddled till the diddle did fid

I love this one. The imagery is very potent.

frankly I was a bit worried in the beginning ... but I guess this one is for the ahem ... more mature readers so I guess no worries :lol:

thanks ye all

~I bow~

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