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TheLogic

First Time Poster - Ode To The One And Only

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Ok, this is my first ever post on the creative section of this forum and I never normally share anything like this with anyone so it is pretty nerve wracking but I hope you enjoy it and take from it what you will.

I've checked out some peoples work on here and I'm nowhere near as good as them but this poem means something to me. It is called: an ode to the one and only.

Ode to the one and only

Her life brings me happiness,

Joy brings her gaze,

Her lips with a tender kiss,

Leaves me smiling for days.

Her hair falls so elegantly,

Like a waterfall down her face,

When I’m in her arms,

I’d rather be in no other place.

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first one ... good job :tu:

now show us what you had really done ;)

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Thank you lol

What do you mean what I had really done? lol

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thats your first. granted ..... you gots more ...... pour it out :D

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I used to have a whole book full, but that is my first ever ode.

My book got ripped up back when I was in school so all my other work is gone.

Never really had the courage to show people anything I do since I don't believe in my ability to write.

This one was written about my girlfriend who I have been with for quite a while.

She believes in me and is the reason I put this up :)

Edit: Thanks for the nice comment btw lol

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I know a write a bit when I see one :tu:

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Posted (edited)

I know a write a bit when I see one? lol

oh i get you now. My friend explained.

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Very nice.....

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Thank you :)

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Awww ! So sweet. :-)

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Thank you :)

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It's lovely....she must be very special. You should write more :)

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Thank you :)

She is :)

I will try.

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